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• Some people think that children should start learning a foreign language at primary school while others think children should begin in secondary school. • Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

whether or not children should learn a internatinal language is a matter of debate. some teachers and parents insist that cheldren have to learn a second language at primary school. However, others completely oppose this view and claim it is too early for children and they must deal with foreign language at secondary school. Both view should be discussed in this essay before arriving to conclusion. nowadays, dozens of parents believe that children should learn more language from 7 years old. scienentists approve it is possible to learn more than one language from primary school. For instance, i know a man learned 4 language simultaneously from 4 years old. On top of all that, they think learning foreign language is not to be easy by passing time becuase in little years human can learn more and more. In addition, childs brain especially child under 10 years simillar to white paper that can be write every things on it. On the other hands, some others agree children learn second language in secondary school. They consider it is too early to teach foreign language for children. for instance children can not find out mother language with foreign language at the same time. Also, childen endure excessive pessure by learning language early. Some scientists consider children should learn mothers language at first step. Otherwise, they may not learn his first language completely. In my opinion, children should began to learn multiple language at primary school simultaneiosly. In a nutshell, it is clear learning a foreign language at primary school will have a certain contribution but it has some risks for children. for example, they may be forget their mother language and they may not learn appropriate both language constantly.
whether
or not
children
should
learn
a
internatinal
language
is a matter of debate.
some
teachers and parents insist that
cheldren
have to
learn
a second
language
at
primary
school
.
However
, others completely oppose this view and claim it is too early for
children and
they
must
deal with
foreign
language
at secondary
school
. Both view should
be discussed
in this essay
before
arriving to conclusion.

nowadays
, dozens of parents believe that
children
should
learn
more
language
from 7 years
old
.
scienentists
approve it is possible to
learn
more than one
language
from
primary
school
.
For instance
,
i
know a
man
learned 4
language
simultaneously
from 4 years
old
. On top of all that, they
think
learning
foreign
language
is not to be easy by passing time
becuase
in
little
years human can
learn
more and more.
In addition
,
childs
brain
especially
child under 10 years
simillar
to white paper that can be
write
every
things
on it.

On the other hands,
some
others
agree
children
learn
second
language
in secondary
school
. They consider it is too early to teach
foreign
language
for
children
.
for
instance
children
can not find out mother
language
with
foreign
language
at the same time.
Also
,
childen
endure excessive
pessure
by learning
language
early.
Some
scientists consider
children
should
learn
mothers
language
at
first
step.
Otherwise
, they may not
learn
his
first
language
completely.

In my opinion,
children
should
began
to
learn
multiple
language
at
primary
school
simultaneiosly
.

In a nutshell, it is
clear
learning a
foreign
language
at
primary
school
will have a certain contribution
but
it has
some
risks
for
children
.
for
example, they
may be
forget
their mother
language and
they may not
learn
appropriate both
language
constantly
.
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IELTS essay • Some people think that children should start learning a foreign language at primary school while others think children should begin in secondary school. •

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
286 words
5.5
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