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Some people think that children should be taught at school to recycle materials and avoid waste .other believe that children should be taught this at home .Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that children should be taught at school to recycle materials and avoid waste. other believe that children should be taught this at home. dW0P
People believe that institutes are responsible for kids awareness about the knowledge of recycling and wastage. Although I agree that children should be taught at school. In this essay I will discuss both the views. On the one hand, schools are definitely responsible for kids awareness about the recycling of material and how to keep away from wastage. The reason behind this is that teachers that are working in schools are payed with handsome amount for children grooming.
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believe that institutes are responsible for kids awareness about the knowledge of recycling and wastage.
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Although
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
that children should
be taught
at school. In this essay I will discuss both the views. On the one hand, schools are definitely responsible for kids awareness about the recycling of material and how to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
away from wastage. The reason behind this is that teachers that are working in schools are
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payed
with handsome amount for children grooming.

IELTS essay Some people think that children should be taught at school to recycle materials and avoid waste. other believe that children should be taught this at home.

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  American English
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78 words
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