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In many countries the tradition of families having meals together is disappearing. Why is this happening? What will be the effect of it on the family and society?

In many countries the tradition of families having meals together is disappearing. Why is this happening? What will be the effect of it on the family and society? RD7Q
In a plethora of countries the culture of having meals along with the family members are slowly decreasing, In this essay, I am going to discuss causes and how this will affect the family and society. Firstly, the main reason why this tradition is disappearing is due to lack of time. due to the fact in present generation people feel that money is more important, which is depend on the time. As a proof, in Australia public are busy with their works. I had a brother who was doing master's along with his friend staying in same the accomodation. One day I asked him how was your friend doing their, he replied I did not saw him from past one week. I asked why, then he said that time is essential to make money. Secondly, in olden days individuals prefer to eat together at least at evenings because of that the members can talk and exchange that with each other. By this the members can spend their time with family. But present scenario was different no one eating together. The memories with family cannot be made and it effects a lot on society because the people loss the ability to communicate with the public, and they become more selfish and cannot help others in any kind of important situation people. To sum up. I discussed the cause and effects on the family and society. That is due to the lack of time and memories with family cannot be made and no good relation with the society.
In a plethora of countries the culture of having meals along with the
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family
members are
slowly
decreasing, In this essay, I am going to discuss causes and how this will affect the
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family
and
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society
.
Firstly
, the main reason why this tradition is disappearing is due to lack of
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time
.
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due
to the fact in present generation
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people
feel that money is more
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important
, which is
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depend
on the
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time
. As a proof, in Australia public are busy with their works. I had a brother who was doing master's along with his friend staying in same the
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accomodation
. One day I asked him how was your friend doing their, he replied I did not
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saw
him from past one week. I asked why, then he said that
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time
is essential to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
money.

Secondly
, in olden days individuals prefer to eat together at least at evenings
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because
of that the members can talk and exchange that with each other. By this the members can spend their
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time
with
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family
.
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But
present scenario was
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different
no one eating together. The memories with
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family
cannot
be made
and it effects a lot on
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society
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
loss the ability to communicate with the public, and they become more selfish and cannot
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help
others in any kind of
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important
situation
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people
.

To sum up. I discussed the cause and effects on the
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family
and
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society
.
That is
due to the lack of
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time
and memories with
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family
cannot
be made
and no
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
relation with the
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society
.
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IELTS essay In many countries the tradition of families having meals together is disappearing. Why is this happening? What will be the effect of it on the family and society?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
256 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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