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some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. nOJK
The fact that citizens do not make use of the home waste and until and unless the government makes a lawful rule to do so is indeed true. This essay depicts on why this is happening. Human mankind seems to have the habit or need of acquiring things that are those with finest quality or first hand quality rather than recycled products due to the standard of living they show upon the society. Wastes from home, eventhough if it could be easily recycled is avoided due to this reason. Nevertheless, the society do judge the people having recycled goods and consider them poor rather than smart work. This makes a person to negate the thought of recycling even if it does have lot of worthy advantages. Moreover, the people do takes things or commodities for granted and does not think about it until or unless they get scarce. Only a rule from orginisations like the government can change the citizens from wasting household products to practice reusing them in the most possible way. According to a recent studies held in Japan, 73 % of locals in a particular area tends to recycle products because of the fact that they are too expensive for new ones. Government when making recycling a legal need not only helps in waste reduction but also helps in saving money out of it. In conclusion, eventhough people have a chance to reutilize their own household products, they seem to avoid it and the only way to force them is to make a rule on it by the country government.
The fact that citizens do not
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use
of the home waste and until and unless the
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government
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makes
a lawful
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rule
to do
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is
indeed
true. This essay depicts on why this is happening.

Human mankind seems to have the habit or need of acquiring things that are those with
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finest
quality or
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first hand
quality
rather
than recycled
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products
due to the standard of living they
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show
upon the society. Wastes from home,
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eventhough
if it could be
easily
recycled
is avoided
due to this reason.
Nevertheless
, the society do judge the
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people
having recycled
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goods
and consider them poor
rather
than smart work. This
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makes
a person to negate the
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thought
of recycling even if it does have
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lot of
worthy advantages.

Moreover
, the
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people
do takes things or commodities for granted and does not
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think
about it until or unless they
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get
scarce.
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Only
a
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rule
from
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orginisations
like the
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government
can
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change
the citizens from wasting household
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products
to practice reusing them in the most possible way. According to a recent
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studies
held in Japan, 73 % of locals in a particular area tends to recycle
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products
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because of the fact that
they are too expensive for new ones.
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Government
when making recycling a legal need not
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only
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helps
in waste reduction
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but
also
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helps
in saving money out of it.

In conclusion
,
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eventhough
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people
have a chance to reutilize their
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own
household
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products
, they seem to avoid it and the
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only
way to force them is to
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make
a
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rule
on it by the country
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government
.
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IELTS essay some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement.

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