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Some people think that children benifit greatly from going to private school, but others prefer to sending their children to public schools.

Some people think that children benifit greatly from going to private school, but others prefer to sending their children to public schools. 8qnm
Some parents argue that it is good for children to stay away from their families and go to private schools. Others suggessted that children live with their familiies and attend a day school. In the following paraghraphes I discuss both view and I will give my opinion. Parents want to sending their children to private school, although they have to pay extremely high tuitions for their children. Despite the fact that a private school is very often associated with quality service, professional teaching staff, competative courses, and excellent facilities. Private schools outperform public schools based on their more flexible and advanced academic and extra curricular programmes. It is capable of adjusting their programmes for students of different levels. Another remarkable quality of private schools are formulating and promoting different non- academic programmes such as group sports, outings to foster students physical emotional and social well- being. Besides that living away from home, children have to make most of daily dicisions by themselves. They have to do the loundry themselves manage their diets, keep their rooms and bedrooms clean and tidy. They are more self-disciplined than those who attend day schools. Though the position of a private school as well-qualified education only for rich families. Because of education fees. But public schools, there is no cost to attend there. Children will attend school with children living in the neightborhood making it easier to encourage friendship with classmates. Public schools are bigger than private schools. They have a large field for sports activities and to holding competions among pupils. There are a lot of well equipped rooms for studiying. Teachers are experienced and they always control pupils. They meet their parents face to face or contact with their families. In public schools have a number of opportunities for ability pupils by prinsiples of public schools. Pupils attend any compitions and get high levels. Even they compite with pupils of private schools. After lesson they can go extra activities such as spots, art, music and other courses. Pupils spend much time with your parents and they help their houseworking. They tackle problems with each other. So children become good- mannered and have a positive self-image. In conclusion, Although the private school is better than public school in many aspects but not everyone will be able to attend. But public schools are open to everybody and better than prhvate schools because of organized communicative places for their parents.
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I discuss both view and I will give my opinion.
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is
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associated with quality service, professional teaching staff,
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based on their more flexible and advanced academic and
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for students of
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such as group sports, outings to foster students physical emotional and social well- being.
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their rooms and bedrooms clean and tidy. They are more self-disciplined than those who
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day
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schools
. Though the position of a
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private
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as well
-qualified education
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, there is no cost to
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living in the
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making it easier to encourage friendship with classmates.
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Public
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schools
are bigger than
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. They have a large field for sports activities and to holding
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competions
among
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well equipped
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face to face or contact with their families. In
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schools
have a number of opportunities for ability
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by
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any
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can go extra activities such as spots, art, music and other courses.
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spend much time with your
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, Although the
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is better than
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in
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are open to everybody and better than
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IELTS essay Some people think that children benifit greatly from going to private school, but others prefer to sending their children to public schools.

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