There is no doubt that to compete is an essential quality in children and should be
motivated, I believe that cooperation is a more important trait which guides them to
become more useful individuals and adults.
Those who advocate that a sense of competition in children is important and should
be motivated further, may argue that it instills in them a sense of purpose. For
instance, on a sports day, students with a spirit to compete will put in their best
efforts to win a running race, caring least about their friends or peers. This is because
they focus only on their goal and the means to achieve it. As a result, it helps them to
conquer any obstacle in their path to victory.
However, I would argue that cooperation is a more beneficial attribute, which should
be taught to children. This is because it makes the person more inclusive and open to
give a helping hand to others. It helps an individual rise above all barriers and unite
with others to promote mutual well-being. For example, a child who is co-operative
will help his friends with homework and exam preparations, rather than being selfish
to attain the highest grade himself/herself and denying to help others. Moreover,
being co-operative helps one to become a better individual, by sharing everyone’s
joys and sorrows and helping people to rise up when they face hurdles.
In conclusion, although a competitive spirit gives one a sense of purpose and
achievement, a co-operative student and adult gives back more to society by helping
and becoming caring individuals, and I believe that the foundation of the human
society lies on co-operation.
There is no doubt that to compete is an essential quality in children and should
be
motivated
, I believe that cooperation is a more
important
trait which guides them to
become
more useful
individuals
and adults.
Those who advocate that a sense of competition in children is
important
and should
be
motivated
further
, may argue that it instills in them a sense of purpose. For
instance, on a sports day, students with a spirit to compete will put in their best
efforts
to win a running race, caring least about their friends or peers. This is
because
they
focus
only
on their goal and the means to achieve it.
As a result
, it
helps
them
to
conquer
any obstacle in their path to victory.
However
, I would argue that cooperation is a more beneficial attribute, which should
be
taught to children. This is
because
it
makes
the person more inclusive and open
to
give
a helping hand to others. It
helps
an
individual
rise
above all
barriers and
unite
with
others to promote mutual well-being.
For example
, a child who is
co-operative
will
help
his friends with homework and exam preparations,
rather
than being selfish
to
attain the highest grade himself/herself and denying to
help
others.
Moreover
,
being co-operative
helps
one to become a better
individual
, by sharing everyone’s
joys
and sorrows and helping
people
to rise up when they face hurdles.
In conclusion
, although a competitive spirit gives one a sense of purpose and
achievement, a co-operative student and adult gives back more to society by helping
and becoming caring
individuals
, and I believe that the foundation of the human
society
lies on co-operation.