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Overpopulation in major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?

In our modern life the increasing of population is global problem that too many governments are thinking about the solving this phenomenon. Migrating from countryside and villages to central places is becoming popular among the people who are living edge of the country. Nevertheless, this problem could be tackled by governments which to increase the life quality in villages to get on with cities. The first main factor of this crucial issue is coming from towns and other remote places to study at high school and after the graduation working and staying there. Nowadays too many universities situated in cities and students coming from other villages in order to get a high grade certificate from them. In fact, approximately 60% of teenager who are studying at universities coming from districts. The second vital influential cause is high quality and more convenient life that attracting people who were living in villages. Especially adults have the prejudice to migrate cities to make new life without difficulties just like before in countryside. According to the fact In Uzbekistan 56% of citizens faced with urbanization. An effective way to improve the current situation is solved by government that champion new infrastructure with finance and bring new cities life for villages. Improving rural life would be better with repairing main roads, raising Network Connection speed and defining in which type of occupation is more efficient for this place and to make sure this opportunity for people. Politicians have claimed that investors provide money in villages that near the big mountains to improving tourism especially in the valley part of Uzbekistan. Ultimate opinion is in large cities monitored overpopulating rate of people that the result of migrating from small towns. The only way to ensure this phenomenon is encourage investors for villages to make the some kind of industry in these places.
In our modern
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the increasing of population is global problem that too
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governments
are thinking about the solving this phenomenon. Migrating from countryside and
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villages
to central
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places
is becoming popular among the
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people
who are living edge of the country.
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governments
which to increase the
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life
quality in
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on with cities.

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main factor of this crucial issue is coming from towns and other remote
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places
to study at high school and after the graduation working and staying there. Nowadays too
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universities situated in
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cities
and students coming from other
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villages
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get
a high grade certificate from them. In fact, approximately 60% of
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teenager
who are studying at universities coming from districts. The second vital influential cause is high quality and more convenient
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life
that attracting
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who were living in
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villages
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adults have the prejudice to migrate
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cities
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without difficulties
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in countryside. According to the fact In Uzbekistan 56% of citizens faced with urbanization.

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current
situation
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government
that champion new infrastructure with finance and bring new
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cities
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life
for
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villages
. Improving rural
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life
would be better with repairing main roads, raising Network Connection speed and defining in which type of occupation is more efficient for this
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place
and to
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make
sure this opportunity for
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people
. Politicians have claimed that investors provide money in
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villages
that near the
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big
mountains to improving tourism
especially
in the valley part of Uzbekistan.

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cities
monitored overpopulating rate of
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people
that the result of migrating from
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small
towns. The
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only
way to ensure this phenomenon is
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investors for
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villages
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some
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places
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IELTS essay Overpopulation in major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
306 words
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