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some people think loss of animals and plants cause environmental problems others thinks there are more important problems

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These days, the community serounded by amount of environmental knots. There are some groups that believe it is because live habitats and, on the other hand, Another individuals are on the opinion of that there is pivotal reasons beside animals and plants. This essay consist both groups vision. To begin with, some people think the loss of especial animals and plants. This can be, because of the life cycle. Everyone knows that animals and plants are directly effect on environment and there is a certain cycle and when it damage, all environment and habitat will be damage. For instance, When a planet, which is a food source for an especial animal, destroyed; that specie will destroy, as well. And it will strenghe till the environment will damage. Thus, people think this cycle is more important than we can observe. Second group believe that there are more important reasons that animals. Actually, there is. Fossil fuels can be another important problem to the environment. every day the percentage of utilizing of fuels are rising and air is going to be more polluted every day. According to the former statement, this pollution can origins amount of problem for plants and animals. these, disadvantages can be the function of the plants and animals problem, Thus, this can be the pivotal problem. To conclusion, The presence of the green life and animals can be incredibly important, but the fossil fuels have pivotal impact on both environment and it's detail and members.
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the fossil fuels have pivotal impact on both
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IELTS essay some people think loss of animals and plants cause environmental problems others thinks there are more important problems

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