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Some people think government should provide free education at every level however some say that individual should pay for their education discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people think government should provide free education at every level however some say that individual should pay for their education discuss both views and give your opinion OQDd
[3/28, 11: 59 AM] Jass Panju: Nowadays education play Paramount role in everyone's life. Some people believe that education should be paid by government and other think education should be paid by individual. But my point of view education should be provided by government this essay in to explore the idea regarding educational system. [3/28, 12: 05 PM] Jass Panju: To begin with education play in essential role in everyone's life without education. We cannot achieve their goals first and foremost government should provide free education for those students who cannot afford it because in future, they cannot face any type of problems such as lettuces literacy and unemployment apart from this government have basics right to get up education opportunities because they paid tax such as goods and services tax income tax. And so on due to this country may not grow and people face number of problems like poverty unemployment and more many
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play Paramount role in everyone's life.
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Some
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people
believe that
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education
should
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by
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government
and other
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think
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education
should
be paid
by individual.
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But
my point of view
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education
should
be provided
by
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government
this essay in to explore the
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idea
regarding educational system.

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begin
with
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education
play in essential role in everyone's life without
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education
. We cannot achieve their goals
first
and foremost
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government
should provide free
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education
for those students who cannot afford it
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because
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in future
, they cannot face any type of problems such as lettuces literacy and unemployment apart from this
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government
have basics right to
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get
up
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education
opportunities
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because
they paid tax such as
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goods
and services tax income tax. And
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so
on due to this country may not grow and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
face number of problems like poverty unemployment and more
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many

IELTS essay Some people think government should provide free education at every level however some say that individual should pay for their education discuss both views and give your opinion

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
154 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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