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Some People Say The The Main Environmental Problem Of Our Time Is The Loss Of Particular Species Of Plants And Animals

Some People Say The The Main Environmental Problem Of Our Time Is The Loss Of Particular Species Of Plants And Animals BAKj
A number of people has raised their concern that the declining existance of certain floras and faunas must be the cause of environmental difficulties. On the contrary, others also opined that there are actually plethora of environmental problems which are more essential that of that thought. Firstly, as our world is increasingly becoming more modern then we can not simply put aside the fact that any issue concerning our environment is so vital. In this context, the presence of both floras and faunas would definitely keep our environment intact. And if only any of their species were suffering from illegal hunting or illegal logging which cause the declining of their species then it would eventually impact the stability of our world. For instance, it has been known for that one of the main benefits of floras and faunas is to prevent natural disaster by keeping the sustainability of our natural environment such as forests, oceans, etc. Consequently, if they become extinct then it would lead to another crisis which would also threat our world. Secondly, other environtmental disasters seem more devastating such as flash floods which destroys people's houses or high level of pollution that results in breathing problems in some people. However, these disasters can not be separated from other issue like the presence of floras and faunas which is in danger. Then every problem in our environment is related to one another. For example, bad water respiratory in a number of metropolitan cities often causes huge flood in some of their business areas due to the fact that there is only few plants to absorb water or to fix that problems. To conclude, it is fair to say that every environmental difficulty is indispensable to be solved and there is no problem more important than of that the other one.
A number of
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people
has raised their concern that the declining
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existance
of certain
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floras
and faunas
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must
be the cause of environmental difficulties.
On the contrary
, others
also
opined that there are actually plethora of environmental
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problems
which are more essential that of that
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thought
.

Firstly
, as our world is
increasingly
becoming more modern
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then
we can not
simply
put aside the fact that any issue concerning our
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environment
is
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so
vital. In this context, the presence of both
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floras
and faunas would definitely
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keep
our
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environment
intact. And if
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only
any of their species were suffering from illegal hunting or illegal logging which cause the declining of their species then it would
eventually
impact the stability of our world.
For instance
, it has
been known
for that one of the main benefits of
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floras
and faunas is to
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prevent
natural disaster by keeping the sustainability of our natural
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environment
such as forests, oceans, etc.
Consequently
, if they become extinct then it would lead to another crisis which would
also
threat our world.

Secondly
,
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other
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environtmental
disasters seem more devastating such as flash floods which
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destroys
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people
's
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houses
or high level of pollution that results in breathing
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problems
in
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some
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people
.
However
, these disasters can not
be separated
from
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other
issue like the presence of
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floras
and faunas which is in
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danger
. Then every
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problem
in our
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environment
is related
to one another.
For example
,
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bad
water respiratory in a number of metropolitan cities
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often
causes huge flood in
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some
of their business areas due to the fact that there is
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only
few plants to absorb water or to
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fix
that problems.

To conclude
, it is
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fair
to say that every environmental difficulty is indispensable to
be solved
and there is no
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problem
more
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important
than of that the
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other
one.
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IELTS essay Some People Say The The Main Environmental Problem Of Our Time Is The Loss Of Particular Species Of Plants And Animals

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
302 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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