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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there ate more important environmental problems

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there ate more important environmental problems A6D3
Admittedly, it is thought by a number of that, the major environmental issue which is facing by this era is the extinction of endangered species of plants and animals, on the contrary few others contradict the above mentioned argument. It is arguably, there is no exaggeration to say that we live in an era of developments whereby the plethora of inventions have profoundly affected our day-to-day life even though it is dangerously affected the environment. Hence, it is considered as a debatable issue today. The following paragraphs diligently scrutinize both the views and reach at a justifiable opinion of mine. On the one side of the argument, main natural issues occurred due to the destruction of certain species of plants and animals. Those plants and animals extinct due to the over exploitation of setting by the human being. Thus, the other reasons should be considered for the corporeal issues which lead to the extinction of those species. To make it more clear deforestation is the main threat to the setting. Due to the deforestation numerous animals and plants lose their natural habitat. Hence, it accelerates the extinction of those species. To cite an example, the recent survey showed the fact that, due to deforestation on Amazon rain forest numerous rarely rare species of plants and animals lost their natural habitat and it start to extinct. Consequently, the loss of particular species can't be determined as a substantial issue. The destruction of certain species of plants and animals occur as the result of a number of other natural issues. On the contrary, few people believe that, there are more problems which is affecting the nature badly. All the environmental issues are harmful for the environment and the species as well. To add further, various kinds of pollutions affect the habitat and the biodiversity. For instance, electromagnetic radiation has vanished thousand varieties of birds from the earth. Axiomatically it caused the spreading different varieties of plants which germinate from the excreta of birds. Therefore, environmental problems and loss of plants and animals are connected to each other. To summarise, having analysed the above discussion it clearly points out the fact that, there are more environmental problems which lead to the extinction of various kinds of plants and animals. Hence, the loss of those particular species of animals and plants are closely associated with the other environmental issues.
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, it is
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thought
by a number of that, the major
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environmental
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issue
which is facing by this era is the
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extinction
of endangered species of
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plants
and
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animals
,
on the contrary
few others contradict the above mentioned argument. It is
arguably
, there is no exaggeration to say that we
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live
in an era of developments whereby the plethora of inventions have
profoundly
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affected
our day-to-day life
even though
it is
dangerously
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affected
the environment.
Hence
, it
is considered
as a debatable
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issue
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today
. The following paragraphs
diligently
scrutinize both the views and reach at a justifiable opinion of mine.

On the one side of the argument, main
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natural
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issues
occurred
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due
to the destruction of certain species of
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plants
and
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animals
. Those
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plants
and
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animals
extinct
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due
to the over exploitation of setting by the human being.
Thus
, the
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other
reasons should
be considered
for the corporeal
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issues
which lead to the
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extinction
of those species. To
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make
it more
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clear
deforestation is the main threat to the setting.
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to the deforestation numerous
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animals
and
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plants
lose their
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natural
habitat.
Hence
, it accelerates the
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extinction
of those species. To cite an example, the recent survey
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showed
the fact that,
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due
to deforestation on Amazon rain forest numerous rarely rare species of
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plants
and
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animals
lost their
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natural
habitat and it
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start
to extinct.
Consequently
, the loss of particular species can't
be determined
as a substantial
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issue
. The destruction of certain species of
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plants
and
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animals
occur as the result of a number of
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other
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natural
issues.

On the contrary
, few
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people
believe that, there are more problems which is affecting the nature
badly
. All the
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environmental
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issues
are harmful for the environment and the species
as well
. To
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add
further
, various kinds of pollutions affect the habitat and the biodiversity.
For instance
, electromagnetic radiation has vanished
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thousand
varieties of birds from the earth.
Axiomatically
it caused the spreading
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different
varieties of
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plants
which germinate from the excreta of birds.
Therefore
,
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environmental
problems and loss of
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plants
and
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animals
are connected
to each other.

To
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summarise
, having
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analysed
the above discussion it
clearly
points out the fact that, there are more
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environmental
problems which lead to the
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extinction
of various kinds of
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plants
and
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animals
.
Hence
, the loss of those particular species of
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animals
and
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plants
are
closely
associated with the
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other
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environmental
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issues
.
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IELTS essay Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there ate more important environmental problems

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
395 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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