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Some people say that professional worker such as doctorsnurses and teachers who make greater contribution to the society should be paid more than those people in the field of sports and entertainment do you agree or disagree

Some people say that professional worker such as doctorsnurses and teachers who make greater contribution to the society should be paid more than those people in the field of sports and entertainment P16g

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