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Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. LV1K
A group of people choose not to eat fleshy food such as meat or fish as they think that it is beneficial for their health as well as for others. Personally, I differ with this mindset and consider that animals are for the benefit of humans, and rightly to be used in limits. A school of thought considers that eating fleshy food is not only useful for their own health, but also for the whole world. They believe that eating meat means killing someone, which is unethical and immoral. Because they will ultimately vanish from the face of the world, we must not kill them merely for eating purposes. Normally, they prefer eating vegetable foods as they believe it is advantageous for their health and saving the beautiful creature for the remaining world. Various religions, for instance, have a different set of rules for eating some permit eating flesh while others do not. Taking an innocent life, therefore, for food should be stopped. In my opinion, I think that these foods are more proteinaceous than vegetables and are for the benefit of human’s health to be eaten. In order to have a healthy digestive system, humans ought to be fed with these types of foods otherwise we need to take pills for them. Also, the argument that it involves killing a life is not making much sense because a plant has a life and cooking them also involves killing a living organism. However, it should be kept in mind that we should not cross the think red line. For example, some countries have banned hunting at all while others allowed them but have rules for different types of birds, which are not meant to be killed as they are rare. Thus, to be the beneficiary of nature, the human should appropriately use animals. In conclusion, while some people argue that not eating meat is better for their own health and is also for the betterment of the world, I believe that animal meat ought to eat as they contain essential proteins and vitamins required for humans.
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choose not to eat fleshy
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such as
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meat
or fish as they
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think
that it is beneficial for their
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health
as well
as for others.
Personally
, I differ with this mindset and consider that animals are for the benefit of
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humans
, and
rightly
to be
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used
in limits.

A school of
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thought
considers that
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eating
fleshy
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food
is not
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useful for their
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own
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health
,
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also
for the whole
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world
. They believe that
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eating
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meat
means killing someone, which is unethical and immoral.
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they will
ultimately
vanish from the face of the
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world
, we
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must
not kill them
merely
for
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eating
purposes.
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, they prefer
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eating
vegetable
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foods
as they believe it is advantageous for their
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health
and saving the
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beautiful
creature for the remaining
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world
. Various religions,
for instance
, have a
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different
set of
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rules
for
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eating
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some
permit
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eating
flesh while others do not. Taking an innocent life,
therefore
, for
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food
should be
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stopped
.

In my opinion, I
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that these
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are more
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proteinaceous
than vegetables and are for the benefit of
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human’s
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health
to
be eaten
. In order to have a healthy digestive system,
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humans
ought to
be fed
with these types of
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foods
otherwise
we need to take pills for them.
Also
, the argument that it involves killing a life is not making much sense
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because
a plant has a life and cooking them
also
involves killing a living organism.
However
, it should be
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kept
in mind that we should not cross the
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think
red line.
For example
,
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countries have banned hunting at all while others
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allowed
them
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rules
for
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different
types of birds, which are not meant to
be killed
as they are rare.
Thus
, to be the beneficiary of nature, the
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human
should
appropriately
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use
animals.

In conclusion
, while
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argue that not
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is better for their
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own
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health
and is
also
for the betterment of the
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world
, I believe that animal
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meat
ought to eat as they contain essential proteins and vitamins required for
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humans
.
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IELTS essay Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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