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Some People Say That It Is Important To Keep Home And Workplace Tidy, with every thing organised and in correct place

Some People Say That It Is Important To Keep Home And Workplace Tidy, with every thing organised and in correct place MMq9k

some people believe that keeping things in right place is utterly crucial. i strongly agree with this view as this habit impact our life positively and enhance our performance. firstly, keeping our place tidy and clean can be extremely positive. From personal point of view, tools arr put in right place, making us far more comfortable to find them and therefore we do not need worry about losing those items when we require them in case of emergency. Take my case for example, my father always used to look up for health document before going to see his doctor he got stressed until we found it for him. Secondly if we keep our house an work place tidy, it will let us know what things we have and therefore, we do not need to rummage in our house to find our be longing, in fact we save valuable time since we know where to find my possessions. Thirdly, working in an orderly work place, brings us positive motivation which enhance both employer and employee creativity. Not only does it improve our personality. but also it can positively boost our knowledge an skill - related career. For example japon are famous for well organised and neat people which this positive approach make them more creative which apparently cause to become the richest country in the world in term of wealth industrial economy. To conclude, Tidy work place an clean home brings positive changes in ourlife and we can reap many benefit while we save a lot of time to consider for other activities.

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some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 believe that keeping things in right You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
 is utterly
 crucial. Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
strongly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with this view as this habit impact our life positively
 and enhance our performance. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFirstly
firstly
, keeping our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
 tidy and clean can be extremely
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspecificconfidentdecisiveclearconclusive
positive
. From personal point of view, tools arr put in right You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
, making us far more comfortable to find them and therefore
 we do not need Did you mean "to worry"?to worry
worry
 about losing those items when we require them in case of emergency. Take my case for example
, my father always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to look up for health document This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 going to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 his doctor he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuated
stressed
 until we found it for him.

Secondly
 if we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
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an
 work You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
 tidy, it will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 us know what things we have and therefore
, we do not need to rummage in our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 to find our be longing, in fact we save valuable time since we know where to find my possessions. Thirdly
, working in an orderly work You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
, brings us You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspecificconfidentdecisiveclearconclusive
positive
 motivation which enhance both employer and employee creativity. Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 does it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 our personality. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBut
but
also
 it can positively
 boost our knowledge Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'a
an
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
-
 related career. For example
Possible spelling mistake found.JapanJasoncaponjapan
japon
 are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 for This word is normally spelled with hyphen.well-organised
well organised
 and neat This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 which this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspecificconfidentdecisiveclearconclusive
positive
 approach This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 them more creative which apparently
 cause to become the richest country in the world in term of wealth industrial economy.

To conclude
, Tidy work You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
place
Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'a
an
 clean home brings You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspecificconfidentdecisiveclearconclusive
positive
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).ourlife, and
ourlife and
 we can reap Possible agreement error. The noun benefit seems to be countable; consider using: "many benefits".many benefits
many benefit
 while we save This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 time to consider for other activities. 