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Some people say that in our modern age, it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting. v.3

Some people say that in our modern age, it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting. v. 3
Many people believe that handwriting skill is no longer important in this era of technology, and children do not require investing time to hone their handwriting, especially when they will most likely type instead of writing for the rest of their life. Unfortunately, this opinion is misguided. I strongly believe that handwriting skill is important even in today’s digital world. Good handwriting is important because when children learn to write clearly and concisely, they also learn how to express themselves properly. This leads to better academic and professional performance. I reckon handwriting is much more than simply putting letters on a page; it is a key part of learning and expressing ideas. Scrawls that cannot be read may be compared to speaking that cannot be understood. Handwriting is also important because children are required to use it daily in school, and who struggles with the mechanics of handwriting may have trouble taking notes or completing their schoolwork. This can affect both their self-esteem and their attitude toward school. Good penmanship means better grades as studies show that the same mediocre paper is graded much higher if the handwriting is neat. More importantly, handwriting proficiency inspires confidence despite some people's belief that handwriting is not related to better academic performance. The more children practise a skill such as handwriting, the stronger the motor pathways become until the skill becomes automatic. Furthermore, handwriting aids memory. For example, if a person writes a list or a note and then loses it, he is more likely to remember what he wrote than if he just tries to memorize it. In conclusion, computer and digital data have no way replaced the necessity of handwriting skills. They are even more prevailing in this era of technology where good handwriting is related to academic performance and success, one the one hand, and inspires confidence, on the other hand.
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children
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children
learn to write
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and
concisely
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also
learn how to express themselves
properly
. This leads to better academic and professional performance. I reckon
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handwriting
is much more than
simply
putting letters on a page; it is a key part of learning and expressing
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ideas
. Scrawls that cannot
be read
may
be compared
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it daily in school, and who struggles with the mechanics of
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may have trouble taking notes or completing their schoolwork. This can affect both their self-esteem and their attitude toward school.
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penmanship means better grades as studies
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is neat.

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importantly
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proficiency inspires confidence despite
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's belief that
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is not related to better academic performance. The more
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children
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, the stronger the motor pathways become until the
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becomes automatic.
Furthermore
,
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aids memory.
For example
, if a person writes a list or a note and then loses it, he is more likely to remember what he wrote than if he
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just
tries to memorize it.

In conclusion
, computer and digital data have no way replaced the necessity of
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handwriting
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. They are even more prevailing in this era of technology where
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IELTS essay Some people say that in our modern age, it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
311 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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