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some people say that economic development is necessary to reduce the poverty in the world other say that economic growth should be stopped immediately to stop damaging the environment discuss both side and give your opinion

some people say that economic development is necessary to reduce the poverty in the world other say that economic growth should be stopped immediately to stop damaging the environment discuss both side and give your opinion Ajg2x
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IELTS essay some people say that economic development is necessary to reduce the poverty in the world other say that economic growth should be stopped immediately to stop damaging the environment discuss both side and give your opinion

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  American English
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