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“How to avoid stress from studying in an international program”

“How to avoid stress from studying in an international program” ljRAw
In this day and age, educational institutions have changed significantly in various ways. The selecting course is some ways that possibly can prove the learner to be more effective, or more expert, particularly an international program. This choice leads to stress from studying. Due to this reason that I mentioned, there are many justifications for even though educators learn this course, It has some stress. The following paragraph will be examined throughout this essay on how to avoid this pressure. Regarding the positive outcomes, a few of the viability of international program ponders have been recognized to consider for several reasons. The first important one is doing a favourite activity. After studying, it is advisable to find an activity that you enjoy. By separating time so that numerous learners can put the rest of the time to other activities that you are satisfied with. A clear illustration of this is watching your favourite artist, listening to your favourite music, hanging out with your friends or playing on your favourite social network. It possibly will make educators that relieve stress and put us in a good mood even more Another important one is to be optimistic. Whether it is a good perspective, not everyone can have a good opportunity for studying international programs, contributing to many benefits, especially foreign teachers or experts in two or third languages. Some people may have to be overly anxious which leads to the understanding and fatigue of the body learned by being optimistic and emotional. Due to the fact that well-educated learners lead learners to meet a good environment, positive thinking makes learners enjoy as well as proud of the international program. In conclusion, even though an international program has some drawbacks, it also has some benefits for learners. Personally, I think the students should recognize that not everyone can have a chance like this. They should attempt to learn and continue in their expectation effectively.
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changed
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in various ways. The selecting course is
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some
ways that
possibly
can prove the
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learner
to be more effective, or more expert,
particularly
an
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international
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program
. This choice leads to
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stress
from studying. Due to this reason that I mentioned, there are
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many
justifications for
even though
educators learn this course, It has
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some
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stress
. The following paragraph will
be examined
throughout this essay on how to avoid this pressure.

Regarding the
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positive
outcomes, a few of the viability of
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international
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program
ponders have
been recognized
to consider for several reasons. The
first
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important
one is doing a
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favourite
activity. After studying, it is advisable to find an activity that you enjoy. By separating time
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so
that numerous
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learners
can put the rest of the time to other activities that you
are satisfied
with. A
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clear
illustration of this is watching your
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favourite
artist, listening to your
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favourite
music, hanging out with your friends or playing on your
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favourite
social network. It
possibly
will
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make
educators that relieve
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stress
and put us in a
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good
mood even
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more


Another
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important
one is to be optimistic. Whether it is a
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good
perspective, not everyone can have a
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good
opportunity for studying
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international
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programs
, contributing to
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many
benefits,
especially
foreign teachers or experts in two or third languages.
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people
may
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have to
be
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anxious which leads to the understanding and fatigue of the body learned by being optimistic and emotional. Due to the fact that well-educated
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learners
lead
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learners
to
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meet
a
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good
environment,
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positive
thinking
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makes
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learners
enjoy
as well
as proud of the
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international
program.

In conclusion
,
even though
an
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international
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program
has
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some
drawbacks, it
also
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some
benefits for
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learners
.
Personally
, I
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think
the students should recognize that not everyone can have a chance like this. They should attempt to learn and continue in their expectation
effectively
.
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IELTS essay “How to avoid stress from studying in an international program”

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
321 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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