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Some people say that chatting or going in a hangout is the best way to increase a bond.Other say that sharing meme is the best way to increase a bond. To what do you agree or disagree and give your opinion.

Some people say that chatting or going in a hangout is the best way to increase a bond. Other say that sharing meme is the best way to increase a bond. To what and give your opinion. bYma3
A tiny number of individuals share the view that chatting or meeting with friends is the best way to increase their bond. Whilst some others say that sharing meme is the best way. I agree with the statement that says chatting or meeting with friends is very much benefecial in order to increase their bond as social media is the best way to make friends and we can know each other very easily. Human are by born social being, and they can't live alone. By the advance of social media platforms, it has now become more easier to make friends, and it's possible to chat with friends at any time we want. This is a proper way because by chatting or by hangout we can know the person properly, and it will help us to understand them. Besides, we can judge their mentality as well as their behaviour if we spent majority of time with them. Sometimes we share our dark secrets and our words in times of depression and frustation which helps us to understand the. When we go for hangout, it may be possible we face some difficult situations, and in those times we will get to know if they are our real or fake friends. Sharing meme is the worst way to communicate with friends as it mostly depends on the recievers mood. We try to mke our friends smily or laugh by sending meme but they may feel bullying, and sometimes even possible to feel jealousy. Some people feel disgusting after seeing so many of these things. To sum up, chatting or hangout is the best possible way to increase our bond as it provides us a way to understand each other properly and we can choose the right one.
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way to increase their bond. Whilst
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some
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with the statement that says
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chatting
or meeting with
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friends
is
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very
much
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benefecial
in order to increase their bond as social media is the
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best
way to
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make
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friends and
we can know each other
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very
easily
.

Human are by born social being, and they can't
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live
alone. By the advance of social media platforms, it has
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now
become
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more easier
to
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make
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friends
, and it's
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possible
to chat with
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friends
at any
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time
we want. This is a proper way
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because
by
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chatting
or by hangout we can know the person
properly
, and it will
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help
us to understand them.
Besides
, we can judge their mentality
as well
as their
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behaviour
if we spent
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with them.
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we share our dark secrets and our words in
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times
of depression and
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frustation
which
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helps
us to understand
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the.
When we go for hangout, it may be
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possible
we face
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difficult situations, and in those
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times
we will
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get
to know if they are our real or fake friends.

Sharing meme is the worst way to communicate with
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friends
as it
mostly
depends on the
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recievers
mood. We try to
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mke
our
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friends
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smily
or laugh by sending meme
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they may feel bullying, and
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sometimes
even
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possible
to feel jealousy.
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people
feel disgusting after seeing
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so
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many
of these things.

To sum up,
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chatting
or hangout is the
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best
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possible
way to increase our bond as it provides us a way to understand each other
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properly and
we can choose the right one.
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IELTS essay Some people say that chatting or going in a hangout is the best way to increase a bond. Other say that sharing meme is the best way to increase a bond. To what and give your opinion.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
294 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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