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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

n this day and age, what subject students should concentrate on is a matter of great concern. In this fast-paced world, children want to explore the myriad of new technologies and its advancements, and at the same time, they want to learn more about their past of how they have evolved. Subsequently, Whether history subject or science and technology studies, which subject plays a salient role in juveniles overall development, it is the topic discussed by many academicians. However, focusing more on science and technology studies will eventually help the kids move ahead in the current scenario and become tomorrow's leader. On the one hand, learning about history helps us to understand our roots and human struggle. These days people forget about the leaders and freedom fighters who gave their life for their country and its people. It is an absolute imperative for the educational institutes to let their student know about society's real heroes and the unforgettable events in the history bases on which our foundation lies. For instance, before the construction of any high rise structure, its foundation is made in the same way for students without learning about history, their knowledge foundation would be weak. Admittedly, learners need to learn about past mistakes or our glorious history to make a better future for upcoming generations. On the other hand, the pace with which the whole world is moving scholars need to acquire the knowledge at the same rate to sustain in the current era. Technologies, gadgets and supercomputers are now getting advanced and problematic on a daily basis. If one doesn't have the required skills and knowledge are left behind, schools and college need to cope with this situation and equip their people with the latest technology to gain the necessary skills. To exemplify, there are now no more regular classrooms in the schools, whereas, classes are lashed with all the latest technology and now called smart schools where more emphasises given on learning new technology. Hence, today, no one can deny that by emphasising science subjects at schools, we are making our coming generation future-ready. The obvious conclusion is that though studying history plays a crucial role in making a strong foundation, and there is a greater need to emphasise science subjects as our future lies based on the knowledge that scholars have gained particularly on these topics. Today, generation is now being leed by technology giants, and kids need to follow their footprint and become future techpreneur and make this earth a safe place to live and grow.
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this day and age, what
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subject
students should concentrate on is a matter of great concern. In this
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fast
-paced world, children want to explore the myriad of new
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technologies
and its advancements, and at the same time, they want to learn more about their past of how they have evolved.
Subsequently
, Whether
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history
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subject
or
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science
and
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technology
studies, which
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subject
plays a salient role in juveniles
overall
development, it is the topic discussed by
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many
academicians.
However
, focusing more on
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science
and
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studies will
eventually
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help
the kids
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move
ahead in the
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current
scenario and become tomorrow's leader.

On the one hand, learning about
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history
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helps
us to understand our roots and human struggle. These days
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people
forget about the leaders and freedom fighters who gave their
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life
for their country and its
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people
. It is an absolute imperative for the educational institutes to
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let
their student know about society's real heroes and the unforgettable
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events
in the
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history
bases on which our
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foundation
lies.
For instance
,
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before
the construction of any high rise structure, its
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foundation
is made
in the same way
for students without learning about
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history
, their
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knowledge
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foundation
would be weak.
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, learners
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need
to learn about past mistakes or our glorious
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history
to
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make
a better future for upcoming generations.

On the other hand
, the pace with which the whole world is moving scholars
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need
to acquire the
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knowledge
at the same rate to sustain in the
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current
era.
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Technologies
, gadgets and supercomputers are
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now
getting advanced and problematic on a daily basis. If one doesn't have the required
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skills
and
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knowledge
are
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left
behind,
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schools
and college
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need
to cope with this situation and equip their
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people
with the latest
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technology
to gain the necessary
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skills
. To exemplify, there are
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now
no more regular classrooms in the
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schools
, whereas, classes
are lashed
with all the latest
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technology
and
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now
called smart
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schools
where more
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emphasises
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given
on learning new
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technology
.
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,
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today
, no one can deny that by
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emphasising
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science
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subjects
at
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schools
, we are making our coming generation future-ready.

The obvious conclusion is that though studying
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history
plays a crucial role in making a strong
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foundation
, and there is a greater
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need
to
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emphasise
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science
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subjects
as our future lies based on the
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knowledge
that scholars have gained
particularly
on these topics.
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Today
, generation is
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now
being
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leed
by
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technology
giants, and kids
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need
to follow their footprint and become future
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techpreneur
and
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make
this earth a safe place to
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live
and grow.
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IELTS essay Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history.

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