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Some people prefer to be self-employed whereas other like working for companies or institutions which is a better approach?

Work plays an essential role in everyone's life. Self employment is preferred by a number of people while opponents give preference to the companies or institutions. I will discuss both views in upcoming paragraphs. let us deliberate the compelling reasons which will lead towards a logical inference. To embark on, there are myriad of reasons to shore light upon the former proclivity. To plunge into, the most intrinsic one is that self-depndent. To justify, when masses work alone that time they can make own decisions because multitudes have self dependent and without any interference they can complete their work.
Work plays an essential role in everyone's life. Self employment
is preferred
by a number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
while opponents give preference to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
or institutions. I will discuss both views in upcoming paragraphs.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
us deliberate the compelling reasons which will lead towards a logical inference.

To embark on, there are myriad of reasons to shore light upon the former proclivity. To plunge into, the most intrinsic one is that self-depndent. To justify, when masses work alone that time they can
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make
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
decisions
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
multitudes have self dependent and without any interference they can complete their work.

IELTS essay Some people prefer to be self-employed whereas other like working for companies or institutions which is a better approach?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
99 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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