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Some people feel that the effects of advertising are positive for individuals and businesses, while others think they are negative. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that Advertising are beneficial for Individuals and businesses, while other think they are Adverse. There is widespread worry that this will only lead to myriad of concerns in one's life. However I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay. There are number of arguements in my favor. The most preponderant one is that Advertising plays an essential role in not only in promoting a product of an organisation but also lead to numerous other benefits.

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