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Some people believe that technological tools such as body scanner and CCTV have significantly enhanced our safety and security while others feel that they have resulted In a loss of privacy Do the benefits of these items outweigh their disadvantages

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IELTS essay Some people believe that technological tools such as body scanner and CCTV have significantly enhanced our safety and security while others feel that they have resulted In a loss of privacy Do the benefits of these items outweigh their disadvantages

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