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Modern technology allows machines to perform the hard work instead of humans. Does thishave a positive or a negative effect on people? Give your own opinion and examples

Modern technology allows machines to perform the hard work instead of humans. Does thishave a positive or a negative effect on people? Give your own opinion and examples kYjae
The journey of human beings from working manually to automatic system represents the story of success. Presently, the invention of machines and equipments have made it easier to do work comfortably in every field but relying heavily over machines have some drawbacks too. Here, i would like to assert its positives outweigh negatives results. Manifold points can be put down to shore up work through machines. First and foremost, the presence of machines in medical field is lucrative to cure fatal diseases through surgical and cardiac operations. Hence, machines have uplifted standard of he. . .
The journey of human beings from working
manually
to automatic system represents the story of success.
Presently
, the invention of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
machines
and equipments have made it easier to do work
comfortably
in every field
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
The verb 'to rely' requires the preposition '(up)on': "relying on".
relying
heavily
over
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machines
have
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some
drawbacks too. Here,
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i
would like to assert its positives outweigh negatives results.

Manifold points can
be put
down to shore up work through
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
machines
.
First
and foremost, the presence of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
machines
in medical field is lucrative to cure fatal diseases through surgical and cardiac operations.
Hence
,
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machines
have uplifted standard of he.
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.
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IELTS essay Modern technology allows machines to perform the hard work instead of humans. Does thishave a positive or a negative effect on people? Give your own opinion and examples

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