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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In modern days in every sector individuals find variation to choose things according to their choice. Some set of mankind strongly persive this trend. I also majorly agree with this and my justification are given in ensuing paragraphs. To begin with, in current scenario we have lots of career option to make out future bright. There are number of white collar jobs are available for individual to take as their profession like doctor, teacher, engineer, scientist or also to build their own organization. Moreover, people can choose their career in they have interest like dance, acting, cricket and some skilled activity which like. For instance, Sachin Tendulkar made his career in cricket, because he likes to play cricket. He do hard work in this field at very small age and get fame also. In short their are many opportunities available to make as our profession. To add to this, we also have different variety of choice in food, clothes and other thing which we use in daily routine. There are different kinds of cousin are available for people in all over the world. So, they do not get bored to eating same kind of food everyday. Likewise, in clothing also we found various designs and colour options to purchase. On the other hand, in some things we can not get choice like to survival we have to do work hard and earn money live in this world. As nowadays, price I'd everything is goes constantly increase, it is necessary to earn more money to live better lifestyle. To conclude, as there is no option for do hard work for making money. But, we have many ways or we can say that various job to do and things are available for buying of different categories. I still believe that we y too many option choose.
In modern days in every sector individuals find variation to choose things according to their choice.
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set of mankind
strongly
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persive
this trend. I
also
majorly
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agree
with this and my justification are
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given
in ensuing paragraphs.

To
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begin
with, in
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current
scenario we have lots of career
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option
to
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make
out future bright. There are number of white collar jobs are
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available
for individual to take as their profession like doctor, teacher, engineer, scientist or
also
to build their
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own
organization.
Moreover
,
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people
can choose their career in they have interest like dance, acting, cricket and
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some
skilled activity which like.
For instance
,
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Sachin
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Tendulkar
made his career in cricket,
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because
he likes to play cricket. He
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do
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hard
work in this field at
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very
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small
age and
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get
fame
also
. In short
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their
are
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many
opportunities
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available
to
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make
as our profession.

To
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add
to this, we
also
have
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different
variety of choice in food, clothes and other thing which we
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use
in daily routine. There are
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different
kinds of cousin are
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available
for
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people
in all over the world.
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So
, they do not
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get
bored to eating same kind of food
'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?
everyday
.
Likewise
, in clothing
also
we found various designs and
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colour
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options
to
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purchase
.

On the other hand
, in
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some
things we can not
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get
choice like to survival we
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have to
do work
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hard
and earn money
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live
in this world. As nowadays, price I'd everything is goes
constantly
increase, it is necessary to earn more money to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
better lifestyle.

To conclude
, as there is no
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option
for do
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hard
work for making money.
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But
, we have
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many
Use a comma before 'or' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
ways or
we can say that various job to do and things are
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available
for buying of
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different
categories. I
still
believe that we y too
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many
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option
choose.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
304 words
6.0
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