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Some people believe that internet good source to get data but other opine that internet put bad affect on the childrens.do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that internet good source to get data but other opine that internet put bad affect on the childrens. BJ539
It is hotable debated issue that although some assume that internet is indispensable for humankind to acquire the knowledge for heighten the awareness, other said that to serf the net can put adverse effects on the kids. To some extent, I agree with this statement and I will discuss my viewpoints in the forthcoming paragraphs. Analyzing the statement and explaining the reason behind this is that mankind can easily access at the multitude of information about anything which the kiders like to execute in the life. As well as with the non stop advancing era, children used to play the video games. consequently, they gain more understanding for rudimentary things.
It is
hotable
debated issue that although
some
assume that internet is indispensable for humankind to acquire the knowledge for heighten the awareness, other said that to serf the net can put adverse effects on the kids. To
some
extent, I
agree
with this statement and I will discuss my viewpoints in the forthcoming paragraphs. Analyzing the statement and explaining the reason behind this is that mankind can
easily
access at the multitude of information about anything which the
kiders
like to execute in the life.
As well
as with the non
stop
advancing era, children
used
to play the video games.
consequently
, they gain more understanding for rudimentary things.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that internet good source to get data but other opine that internet put bad affect on the childrens.

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