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Some people believe that good teamwork is what makes companies successful. Others feel that it is more important to have a good leader. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that good teamwork is what makes companies successful. Others feel that it is more important to have a good leader. N7ky
It is important to have good colleagues whether leader or team. It will bring result of project which can be positive or negative therefore we should choice our team carefully. Good organisation is always bring success project. There are several personS who believe that good teamwork is bring good result and it will bring success as well. Firstly, good teamwork is depends on the colleagues which means it can be anyone bring good result and bring bad result as well. Majority of opinion is helpful for concerning various options. However, it brings confusion sometimes therefore, we need the person who have insight and experience in that field. As I mentioned, if we can’t decide which one is better decision then probably we need the person who have enough experience in that field. Company tend to maintaining by the person who have useful skill and that person is normally senior which means it determines the result of success depends on the leader. To sum up, good teamwork is immensely important however this mean is not bring good result always. I believe that good leader bring good teamwork thus, the reader is the most important thing for successful result.
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colleagues whether leader or team. It will
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result
of project which can be
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should choice
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bring
success project. There are several
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personS
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who
believe that
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teamwork
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result
and it will
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bring
success
as well
.

Firstly
,
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teamwork
is depends on the colleagues which means it can be anyone
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bring
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good
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result
and
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bring
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bad
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result
as well
. Majority of opinion is helpful for concerning various options.
However
, it
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brings
confusion
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sometimes
therefore
, we need the
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person
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who
have insight and experience in that field.

As I mentioned, if we can’t decide which one is better decision then
probably
we need the
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person
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who
have
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enough
experience in that field.
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Company
tend to maintaining by the
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person
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who
have useful
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skill
and that
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person
is
normally
senior which means it determines the
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result
of success depends on the leader.

To sum up,
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teamwork
is
immensely
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however
this mean is not
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bring
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good
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result
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always
. I believe that
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good
leader
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bring
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good
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teamwork
thus
, the reader is the most
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important
thing for successful
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IELTS essay Some people believe that good teamwork is what makes companies successful. Others feel that it is more important to have a good leader.

Essay
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