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SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT FIRST-YEAR UNIVERSITY STUDENTS HAVE POOR STUDY SKILL, SHOULD WE GIVE THEM A COURSE TO DEVELOP THEIR STUDY SKILL OR NOT. WHAT DO YOU THINK? EXPLAIN IT WITH SPECIFIC EXAMPLES. v.2

SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT FIRST-YEAR UNIVERSITY STUDENTS HAVE POOR STUDY SKILL, SHOULD WE GIVE THEM A COURSE TO DEVELOP THEIR STUDY SKILL OR NOT. WHAT DO YOU THINK? EXPLAIN IT WITH SPECIFIC EXAMPLES. v. 2
Some first year college students do not have good study habits. Some people believe that colleges should provide all of the first year students with a required course to develop their good study habits. Other people believe that providing this kind of course is unnecessary. I think that it is necessary to provide students required courses. Firstly, these courses can help college students form good study habits. This can also make college students' academic performance better, so that college students can graduate more easily. For example, my cousin, her study habit is not very good, but the school has set up corresponding courses to help her study. She also successfully graduated from school. Secondly,the benefits of the course include the school itself. If the students' study habits are good, the school will become more popular. At the same time, schools will have more and better students. Some famous universities, for example, usually have similar courses to assist students' study. Then the reputation of the school gets bigger and bigger, and the students get better and better, it is a win-win thing. Some people may think it is unnecessary to offer such courses, because college students already have enough classroom pressure. But in my opinion, good study habits can reduce students' pressure and make schools have better benefits.
Some
first
year college
students
do not have
good
study
habits
.
Some
people
believe that colleges should provide
all of the
first
year
students
with a required
course
to develop their
good
study
habits
. Other
people
believe that providing this kind of
course
is unnecessary. I
think
that it is necessary to provide
students
required courses.

Firstly
, these
courses
can
help
college
students
form
good
study
habits
. This can
also
make
college
students&
#039; academic performance
better
,
so
that college
students
can graduate more
easily
.
For example
, my cousin, her
study
habit
is not
very
good
,
but
the
school
has set up corresponding
courses
to
help
her
study
. She
also
successfully
graduated from school.

Secondly,the
benefits of the
course
include the
school
itself. If the
students&
#039;
study
habits
are
good
, the
school
will become more popular. At the same time,
schools
will have more and
better
students
.
Some
famous
universities,
for example
,
usually
have similar
courses
to assist
students&
#039;
study
. Then the reputation of the
school
gets
bigger and bigger, and the
students
get
better
and
better
, it is a win-win thing.

Some
people
may
think
it is unnecessary to offer such
courses
,
because
college
students
already have
enough
classroom pressure.
But
in my opinion,
good
study
habits
can
reduce
students&
#039; pressure and
make
schools
have
better
benefits.
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50Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS essay SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT FIRST-YEAR UNIVERSITY STUDENTS HAVE POOR STUDY SKILL, SHOULD WE GIVE THEM A COURSE TO DEVELOP THEIR STUDY SKILL OR NOT. WHAT DO YOU THINK? EXPLAIN IT WITH SPECIFIC EXAMPLES. v. 2

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