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Some people believe that companies should manufacture products that last for a long time. Others feel that the emphasis should be placed on producing goods that are cheap. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Do you think that being creative is a talent? Or it can be gained from watching television and movies? Creativity is the ability of generating a new idea, or discussing an opinion in a new way to make it striking to others. Some people think that when children watch television that reduce their creativity, but it’s believe that, the ability of being creative can be developed in the children in their young ages by making them watch different types of television programs and movies that can inspire them, build their knowledge and make them think with productivity. Parents are the influencers of their children, and if they take advantage of this point in a right way their kids will be productive and creative, for example: if the parents watch science fiction TV programs everyday with their children, therefore science fiction programs will be the favorite kind of programs for their children, this show us the big role of the parents in their children’s life. Strengthen knowledge for the children is a good way to make them innovative thinkers by making them follow any creative content on the TV that can make them improve any talent they have like: learning how to draw, to sing a song or to write a story. So TV has an important part in every child life. Some people disagree with the notion of the link between watching TV and being creative. because they believe that watching TV reduce children’s creativity because it waste their time even though there are other activities that they can practice in, which is false because watching TV improve children’s knowledge and give them the ability to explore. In conclusion, Parents should help their kids by providing the suitable TV programs for them to watch that can make them create and think out of the box.
Do you
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think
that being
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creative
is a talent? Or it can
be gained
from watching television and movies?

Creativity is the ability of generating a new
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idea
, or discussing an opinion in a new way to
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make
it

striking to others.
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people
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think
that when
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children
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watch
television that
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reduce
their creativity,

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but
it’s believe that, the ability of being
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creative
can
be developed
in the
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children
in their young ages by

making them
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watch
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different
types of television
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programs
and movies that can inspire them, build their

knowledge and
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make
them
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think
with productivity.

Parents are the influencers of their
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children
, and if they take advantage of this point in a right way their

kids will be productive and
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creative
,
for example
: if the parents
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watch
science fiction TV programs

‘Everyday’ is an adjective. Did you mean “every day”?
everyday
with their
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children
,
therefore
science fiction
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programs
will be the favorite kind of
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programs
for

their
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children
, this
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show
us the
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big
role of the parents in their
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children’s
life.

Strengthen knowledge for the
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children
is a
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good
way to
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make
them innovative thinkers by making them

follow any
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creative
content on the TV that can
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make
them
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improve
any talent they have like: learning

how to draw, to sing a song or to write a story.
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So
TV has an
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important
part in every child life.

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Some
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people
disagree with the notion of the link between watching TV and being
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creative
.
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because
they

believe that watching TV
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reduce
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children’s
creativity
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because
it
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waste
their time
even though
there are

other activities that they can practice in, which is false
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because
watching TV
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improve
children’s

knowledge and give them the ability to explore.

In conclusion
, Parents should
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help
their kids by providing the suitable TV
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programs
for them to
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watch


that can
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make
them create and
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think
out of the box.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that companies should manufacture products that last for a long time. Others feel that the emphasis should be placed on producing goods that are cheap.

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
305 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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