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Some people argued that we should purchase expensive but long lasting materials. While other thinks that price matters over quality.

Some people argued that we should purchase expensive but long lasting materials. While other thinks that price matters over quality. KwyN9
Price is the most important consideration when people purchase anything and that is directly related to the quality of the product. The debate of quality versus quantity started after the industrial revolution where some people argued that one should purchase quality products while others are in support of buying cheap products. I also believe that one should not compromise on the quality over quantity but this should not be considered as a universal rule. After the industrial revolution, a boom came of different variety of products ranging from low to high quality. Cheap products may seem like a bargain but for the long run, it does more harm. Usually, expensive products are considered to be of high quality. However, there are various advantages of high-quality products. The most distinctive feature of expensive and high-quality products is the sustainability which saves time and money of consumer. For example, while purchasing a car, one should not go for a cheaper option as it is going to demand frequent maintenance costing time and money. Same is the case while purchasing a house. Quality products do not breakdown easily and they don’t demand frequent maintenance. Besides this, there are some products known as the “buy it for life” which are expensive and high-quality products but they are life-lasting products. More and more people are attracting to buy these due to the fact the durability these products offer. For example, Rolex costs around thousands of dollars but it is a long-lasting watch made with precision and accuracy and cheaper watch lacks these qualities and deteriorates easily, making it hassle for the consumer. Although high-quality expensive products offer a wide range of advantages. But one should consider the fact that every cheap thing is not of low quality. There are a variety of cost-efficient products available offering good quality. For example, eatables such as ice cream, frozen yoghurt and many other things of low price are good in taste and quality. So, to conclude this debate, we can say that quality should never be compromised while purchasing anything but sometimes it is dependent on the product which is being purchased where one can afford to buy cheap products.
Price is the most
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anything and
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quality
of the
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. The debate of
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quality
versus quantity
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started
after the industrial revolution where
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some
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people
argued that one should
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purchase
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quality
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products
while others are in support of buying
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cheap
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products
. I
also
believe that one should not compromise on the
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quality
over quantity
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this should not
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After the industrial revolution, a boom came of
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different
variety of
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products
ranging from low to high
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quality
.
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Cheap
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products
may seem like a bargain
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but
for the long run, it does more harm.
Usually
,
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expensive
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products
are considered
to be of high
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quality
.
However
, there are various advantages of
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high-quality
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products
. The most distinctive feature of
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expensive
and
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high-quality
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products
is the sustainability which saves time and money of consumer.
For example
, while purchasing a car, one should not go for a cheaper option as it is going to demand frequent maintenance costing time and money. Same is the case while purchasing a
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house
.

Quality
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products
do not breakdown
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easily and
they don’t demand frequent maintenance.
Besides
this, there are
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some
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products
known as the “
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buy
it for life” which are
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expensive
and
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high-quality
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products
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but
they are life-lasting
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products
. More and more
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people
are attracting to
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buy
these due to the fact the durability these
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products
offer.
For example
, Rolex costs around thousands of dollars
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but
it is a long-lasting
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watch
made with precision and accuracy and cheaper
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watch
lacks these
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qualities
and deteriorates
easily
, making it hassle for the consumer.

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Although
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high-quality
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expensive
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products
offer a wide range of advantages.
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one should consider the fact that every
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cheap
thing is not of low
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quality
. There are a variety of cost-efficient
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products
available offering
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good
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quality
.
For example
, eatables such as ice cream, frozen
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yoghurt
and
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many
other things of low price are
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good
in taste and quality.

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So
,
to conclude
this debate, we can say that
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quality
should never
be compromised
while purchasing anything
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but
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sometimes
it is dependent on the
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product
which is being
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purchased
where one can afford to
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buy
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cheap
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products
.
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IELTS essay Some people argued that we should purchase expensive but long lasting materials. While other thinks that price matters over quality.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
362 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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