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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? m19Mr
Along with the growing awareness of animal rights, there are a number of people who insist that all animal experimentations should be banned. On the other hand, others claim that animal testings have brought us some scientific advances, therefore it is still needed to continue with the experiments. In fact, most of products in our daily life have been tested on animals to study the possible effects on human and secure its safety, especially for products that can cause a critical damage to human's life, such as vaccines. Even thought the rights of animal should not be fringed for gratuitous testings of minor value, conducting experimentations on animals must continue to prevent greater after-effects that may happen among general public when it's not tested properly. However, there are several options to take animals' well-being into consideration for the testings. First, the scientists conducting the experiments on animal should ensure of the proper treatment of animals that have unexpected side-effects from the experiment. Second, animals in the testing facilities should be guaranteed with access to nature and with some remuneration of their sacrifice, such as offering favorite snacks or entertainment. In addition, there should be a supervision over the experiments on animals so that there will be no unnecessary exploitations of animals. Even though sometimes we can find options of vegan products, it is not always available for all the products we need. However, people should never forget about the sacrifices that are made in the sake of human's benefit and be more conscious of using products that are tested on animals.
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animal
rights, there are a number of
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people
who insist that all
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animal
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experimentations
should
be banned
.
On the other hand
, others claim that
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animal
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testings
have brought us
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some
scientific advances,
therefore
it is
still
needed to continue with the experiments.

In fact, most of
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products
in our daily life have been
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tested
on
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animals
to study the possible effects on human and secure its safety,
especially
for
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products
that can cause
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a critical damage
to human's life, such as vaccines.

Even
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thought
the rights of
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animal
should not
be fringed
for gratuitous
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testings
of minor value, conducting
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experimentations on
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animals
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must
continue to
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prevent
greater after-effects that may happen among
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general public
when it's not
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tested
properly
.

However
, there are several options to take animals' well-being into consideration for the
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testings
.
First
, the scientists conducting the experiments on
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animal
should ensure of the proper treatment of
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animals
that have unexpected
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side-effects
from the experiment. Second,
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animals
in the
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testing
facilities should
be guaranteed
with access to nature and with
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some
remuneration of their sacrifice, such as offering favorite snacks or entertainment.
In addition
, there should be a supervision over the experiments on
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animals
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so
that there will be no unnecessary
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exploitations
of animals.

Even though
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sometimes
we can find options of vegan
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products
, it is not always available for all the
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products
we need.
However
,
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people
should never forget about the sacrifices that
are made
in the sake of human's benefit and be more conscious of using
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products
that are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tested
on
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animals
.
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IELTS essay Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

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