Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Some people are of the opinion that there should be a car-free day once every month, on which no private vehicles are allowed on the road. Discuss the advantages and possible disadvantages

Some people are of the opinion that there should be a car-free day once every month, on which no private vehicles are allowed on the road. Discuss the advantages and possible disadvantages x9L9

Few number of peoples have a opinion, that car-free day are required that has to be followed during once in a month. On following this, we can able to promote use of public transport and reduce pollution. In this essay, we will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of car-free day. The advantage, on introducing car-free day is we can drastically reduce the air and noise pollution in the environment for a day. By that, the nature can repair itself on emitting fresh air in to the earth. Eventually, the number of occurrence of accident for a particular day will also be reduced enormously. On addition to it, the government will get a chance in promoting the usage of private transport by the individuals, who are required to travel for there office or other place for there own use. For instance, the country like Jakarta, government is following every Sunday as car-free day to create awareness among there peoples to use public transport. The drawback on imposing car-free day are, if a person wants to travel a long distance either for his work or other important plan for the day, he feel difficulty in finding the transport and connection points. That is, he need to take up any of the option like bus or train as the car-free day is conducted he is supposed to travel in overcrowded vehicle for his own purpose. However, the disabled person or the patient cannot able to move easily if they are supposed to take local transport. On concluding, by following or imposing some exceptions for old and disable person on the car- free day, peoples will support without any hesitation. It is good to have a car-free day for every nation and all the nation government concentrate on this for the betterment of universe.

Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: "Few numbers".Few numbers
Few number
 of peoples have Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 opinion, that car-free day are required
 that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
be followed
 during once in a month. On following this, we Please check whether one of these words is redundant.can
can able to
 promote This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of public You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransittransportationshipmentshipping
transport
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 pollution. In this essay, we will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of car-free day. The advantage, on introducing car-free day is we can drastically
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the air and noise pollution in the environment for a day. By that, the nature can repair itself on emitting fresh air in to the earth. Eventually
, the number of occurrence of accident for a particular day will also
 be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
enormously
. Did you mean "in"?In
On
 addition to it, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a chance in promoting the usage of private You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransittransportationshipmentshipping
transport
 by the individuals, who are required
 to travel for there office or other place for there This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
. For instance
, the country like Jakarta, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 is following every Sunday as car-free day to create awareness among there peoples to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 public You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransittransportationshipmentshipping
transport
. The drawback on imposing car-free day are, if a person wants to travel a long distance either for his work or other This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 plan for the day, he The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "feels", "felt".feelsfelt
feel
 difficulty in finding the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransittransportationshipmentshipping
transport
 and connection points. That is
, he need to take up any of the option like bus or train as the car-free day is conducted
 he is supposed
 to travel in overcrowded vehicle for his This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 purpose. However
, the disabled person or the patient Did you mean "cannot be able"?cannot be able
cannot able
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
easily
 if they are supposed
 to take local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransittransportationshipmentshipping
transport
. On concluding, by following or imposing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 exceptions for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 and disable person on the car- free day, peoples will support without any hesitation. It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 to have a car-free day for every nation and all the nation This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 concentrate on this for the betterment of universe. 