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Some people agree that testing on animals for medical research is necessary. Others say that this should not happen. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Some people agree that testing on animals for medical research is necessary. Others say that this should not happen. m1Lkr
Nowadays the number of people who are suffering from dangerous diseases is increasing rapidly. Due to this, testing on animals for medical research is also increasing. However, some masses considerd that testing on animals for medical research is important for our life others reckon that this is bad thing and should not happen. this essay will delve into keyfactors to persuade the former view. On the one hand, there are numerous reasons why some individuals are favour in the animals. The prominent one is that animals have a right live on a earth. For elaboration, if people use animals for the purpose of medical research then the number of animals could be decline in future. The creature of nature will aslo demolish. For instance, one newspaper showed that few years ago china used a large number of animals for medical experiments due to this  70 percent of animal population had declined and today there are only 10 percent wild animals. Therefore, if animals are not able to speak then do not use them for medical purpose. On the other hand, there are various reasons why i support the former view point. One of them is that, it is helpful for people to tackle the diseases. To elaborate, Nowadays majority of people are suffering from different dangerous diseases that why doctors are making different types of medicines for people. Due to this reason doctors are use animals to make better medicine for people so they can get relief from illnesses. For example, in USA doctors are using less animals to get better result of their medicine. As a result they are providing better medical facilities to their citizens. In conclusion, although it is not a good thing to testing on animals for medical research, we have no other option to provide better medical facilities to people.
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people
who are suffering from
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diseases is increasing
rapidly
. Due to this, testing on
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animals
for
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medical
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research
is
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increasing.
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some
masses
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considerd
that testing on
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for
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medical
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research
is
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thing and should not happen.
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keyfactors
to persuade the former view.

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some
individuals are
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animals have a right
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people
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use
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animals
for the purpose of
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medical
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research
then the number of
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animals
could be decline
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. The creature of nature will
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aslo
demolish.
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that few years ago china
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animals
for
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medical
experiments due to this
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70 percent of
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animal
population had declined and
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today
there are
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only
10 percent wild
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animals
.
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, if
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animals
are not able to speak then do not
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use
them for
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medical
purpose.

On the other hand
, there are various reasons why
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support the former view point. One of them is that, it is helpful for
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people
to tackle the diseases. To elaborate, Nowadays
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majority of
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people
are suffering from
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different
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dangerous
diseases that why doctors are making
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different
types of medicines for
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people
. Due to this reason doctors are
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use
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animals
to
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make
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better
medicine for
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people
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so
they can
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get
relief from illnesses.
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, in USA doctors are using
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less
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animals
to
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get
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better
result of their medicine.
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a result they are providing
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facilities to their citizens.

In conclusion
, although it is not a
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thing to testing on
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animals
for
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medical
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research
, we have no other option to provide
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better
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medical
facilities to
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people
.
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IELTS essay Some people agree that testing on animals for medical research is necessary. Others say that this should not happen.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
305 words
5.5
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