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Some peopl think that in this modern era people are getting dependent on each otherw, while others think that this world makes them more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some peopl think that in this modern era people are getting dependent on each otherw, while others think that this world makes them more independent of each other. Me5p

It is considered by some that people living in this modern era have become rely on others, whereas, others opine that today's world is letting people to get more freedom. Even though masses are dependent on others for different purposes, I think that nowadays, individuals need not to rely on others. To commence With, myriad of reasons are there which prove that people have to be dependent on their near and dear ones. First and foremost cause is that people who work at any place become depend on their boss as well as colleques as they are not able to take any decision, which can become lucrative for the development of company, without discussing with boda. Apart from this, by being reliant on others, it is likely to get knowledge about work from his/her colloques. As a result, these are some reasons which force everyone to depend on others. On the other hand, firstly, children have been getting more freedom for last few years as nowadays, hectic sehedule is being gotten by most of the people that is reason they give preference to allow children to do all work by own as these things make children more independent. Secondly, in the terms of reducing stress of inflation, younsters are working in order to earn money. With This, not only they can buy anything according to their choice but they will also not have to confront any obstacle while supporting family in financial condition. Hence, people have become more independent. To conclude, although individuals have to depend on others for various things, I nurture this belief that children are becoming more self-reliant thesedays as they used to be in past.

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