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Some countries more and more adults and living with their parents after their graduating from college university or even after finding a jobdo the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

Some countries more and more adults and living with their parents after their graduating from college university or even after finding a jobdo the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages dXX2
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Nowadays going to competitive era of world was
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majority of
mature
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people
from certain Nation proposed to
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resides
with their guardians after taking degrees from college and university or even holding a job I were in my prospective this benefits of this has an edge over its
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negative
consequences
that is
comments by looking at drawbacks of youngster to inhabit
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Mithe
original after completing their dirty education one of the prime
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negative
point
is associated
with the Independence
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see
where they become independent
rather
than dependent
for instance
persons will not be able to fulfill their on tasks such as washing cloth making of disease and
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so
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on on
account of someone support in
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house
as an outcome they will not perform their basic task is
really
what is more
students would not
be completed
to their basic requirements without earning a money insert industry area where there are less opportunity as a consequence they would be more hurdles in living standard of individuals
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despite of
drawbacks of staying to youngster with their Gardens there are
also
certain
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positive
points primary Li
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add
can obtain from origin Atos in order to achieve success a child for cash they can achieve instructions in order to
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making
crucial decisions
as a result
within a short period of time they can
easily
achieve success reading more heat to eat
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macha
person can
easily
spend quality time with their
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family
as well
as
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the burden was earning members which can lead to save money of living in another section adding another crucial perspective on this matter where youngster can assist their Gardens from any serious is
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used
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for for
an illustration they can save their origin status from any chronic melodies if they stay with
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family
on to this there will be no button on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
by way of conclusion I once again rape in my position that there are both
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
negative
points if mature person stay with their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
however
there are more than its then its
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
negative
consequences
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IELTS essay Some countries more and more adults and living with their parents after their graduating from college university or even after finding a jobdo the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
338 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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