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Some countries are struggling with an increase in rate of crime.Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime To what extent do you agree?

Some countries are struggling with an increase in rate of crime. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime 0JB3
Crime rate has been severely effecting many countries on their economic growth. In order to reduce crime more police force patrolling the street. I do not agree completely, as this is not only the solution to this problem. If we take a look at countries crime rate statistics the country which do not have strict punishment or undergoing economic crisis criminality is high. Venezeula due to its worse economic crisis stood first in crime rate
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IELTS essay Some countries are struggling with an increase in rate of crime. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime

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