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some belive it is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in building large outdoor public spaces.to what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Today, infrastructure is more important for faster economy growth and less poverty in the country. There are not only facilities and amenities for cities and towns but it needed huge amount of money while constructing public places also. I am in favour of agreement to heavy investment in devloping larger public spaces. Fristly, to begin with, in devloping cities and towns need free space like covering huge area to construct new buildings. Moreover, people often think of amenities such as good quality of public spaces as luxury for communicate with other people. For example, government should focus to investing moneyon ground work to shopping malls and garden area, as a result, people will commute relatives and go for shopping and visit other devloped sectors of public space for relaxing and lesuire time. So that, they can countinuously connect to society. Further more, some parents also think that, educational sectors need to frame in cities and familiar place such as wolking distance from their house and beside from society, so that people have no worries about their children to travel schools and tuition. For instance, if parents are working than children have to suffer from communicate with school in long distance from their house, so parent get worried about children whole day. Facilities and amenities are there to providing service to parents, so that they can easily do their job. However, underpinning spaces need huge amount of investment on large public sectors, like devloping large building for shopping mall need huge area, outline to contruct, and appoint architecture also. For that govrnment need more and more funds. Sometimes individuals may not like that place and end ignoring it, that will lead to wastage of funds and time as well. To conclude with, as compared to the population and today s situation of covid, govrnment should have to focus on both side. people has small houses to qurantine inhome and near by place. In spite of, each situation has two sides, but constructing public places will ease people to live in cities and town.
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Today
, infrastructure is more
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important
for faster economy growth and less poverty in the country. There are not
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only
facilities and amenities for
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cities
and towns
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but
it needed
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huge
amount of money while constructing
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public
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places
also
. I am in
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favour
of agreement to heavy investment in
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devloping
larger
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public
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spaces
.
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Fristly
, to
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begin
with, in
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devloping
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cities
and towns
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need
free
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space
like covering
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huge
area to construct new buildings.
Moreover
,
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people
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often
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think
of amenities such as
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good
quality of
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public
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spaces
as luxury for communicate with other
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people
.
For example
,
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government
should focus to investing
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moneyon
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ground work
to shopping malls and garden area,
as a result
,
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people
will commute relatives and go for shopping and visit other
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devloped
sectors of
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public
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space
for relaxing and
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lesuire
time.
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So
that, they can
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countinuously
connect to society.
Further
more,
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some
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parents
also
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think
that, educational sectors
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need
to frame in
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cities
and familiar
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place
such as
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wolking
distance from their
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house
and beside from society,
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so
that
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people
have no worries about their children to travel schools and tuition.
For instance
, if
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parents
are working than children
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have to
suffer from communicate with school in long distance from their
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house
,
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so
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parent
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get
worried about children whole day. Facilities and amenities are there to providing service to
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parents
,
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so
that they can
easily
do their job.
However
, underpinning
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spaces
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need
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huge
amount of investment on large
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public
sectors, like
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devloping
large building for shopping mall
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need
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huge
area, outline to
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contruct
, and appoint architecture
also
. For that
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govrnment
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need
more and more funds.
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Sometimes
individuals may not like that
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place
and
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end
ignoring it, that will lead to wastage of funds and time
as well
.
To conclude
with, as compared to the population and
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today
s situation of
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covid
,
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govrnment
should
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have to
focus on both side.
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people
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has
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small
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houses
to
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qurantine
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inhome
and
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near by
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place
.
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, each situation has two sides,
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but
constructing
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public
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places
will
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ease
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people
to
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live
in
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cities
and town.

IELTS essay some belive it is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in building large outdoor public spaces.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
342 words
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