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Some believe that training is necessary to be a good teacher,others think that teachers do not need a training course.Discuss both and give your opinion.

Some believe that training is necessary to be a good teacher, others think that teachers do not need a training course. m72A
Nowadays, various debates are going on over the issue that whether an essential coaching ought to be joined by individuals to be a mentor or humans can become educators without any teaching course. I would explore both approaches before making my viewpoint. To commence with the former notion, the most predominant benefit of training is that humans can learn to utilise multiple methods in order to transfer insight from one to other brains, such as demonstration and lecture methods. They use distinct ways to teach as per the need of learners. Furthermore, public speaking competitions are organized in sessions to boost the confidence of tutors while teaching and to eliminate the hesitation. Such self-esteem is fruitful for mentors to feel comfortable in classroom. On the contrary, a number of dwellers believe that teaching is a natural ability and it cannot be learned by attempting any training sessions. Leadership qualities and academic knowledge, which people learn during educational period, are sufficient to work as teacher in institutes. Another considerable reason is that mentors need to learn patience from their life experiences, as calm to deal with pupils. With passage of age, individuals not only learn to be polite, butalso understand the way to treat kids. In my standpoint, teaching coaching should be mandatory for dwellers owing to emergence of technology in education field. In such courses, humans learn to use electronic equipments in classrooms and conduct smart classes in professional manner. For instance, I ha to prepare Powerpoint presentations and other ways also in teaching course and working as a successful mentor. To conclude, dissimilar masses have distinct views regarding the need of training sessions for tutors, on the contrary I feel that training course should be compulsory for people prior to applying for the job of trainer, owing to benefits in ways more than one.
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joined
by individuals to be a mentor or humans can become educators without any
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teaching
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course
. I would explore both approaches
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before
making my viewpoint.

To commence with the former notion, the most predominant benefit of
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training
is that humans can
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learn
to
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utilise
multiple methods in order to transfer insight from one to other brains, such as demonstration and lecture methods. They
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use
distinct
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ways
to teach as per the need of learners.
Furthermore
, public speaking competitions
are organized
in sessions to boost the confidence of tutors while
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teaching
and to eliminate the hesitation. Such self-esteem is fruitful for mentors to feel comfortable in classroom.

On the contrary
, a number of dwellers believe that
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teaching
is a natural ability and it cannot
be learned
by attempting any
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training
sessions. Leadership qualities and academic knowledge, which
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people
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learn
during educational period, are sufficient to work as teacher in institutes. Another considerable reason is that mentors need to
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learn
patience from their life experiences, as calm to deal with pupils. With passage of age, individuals not
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only
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learn
to be polite,
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butalso
understand the
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way
to treat kids.

In my standpoint,
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teaching
coaching should be mandatory for dwellers owing to emergence of technology in education field. In such
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courses
, humans
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learn
to
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use
electronic equipments in classrooms and conduct smart classes in professional manner.
For instance
, I ha to prepare
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Powerpoint
presentations and other
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ways
also
in
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teaching
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course
and working as a successful mentor.

To conclude
, dissimilar masses have distinct views regarding the need of
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training
sessions for tutors,
on the contrary
I feel that
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training
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course
should be compulsory for
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people
prior to applying for the job of trainer, owing to benefits in
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ways
more than one.
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IELTS essay Some believe that training is necessary to be a good teacher, others think that teachers do not need a training course.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
305 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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