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. Social media is becoming increasingly popular among all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risk. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantage?

In this concurrent era, people have their own digital gadgets like laptops, computers, mobile phone and many others due to that they can easily work from home. However, despites it is difficult to get instant solutions about any queries regarding companies’ task and interrogation with companies, people, I still believe that the advantages of working at home outweigh the drawbacks. On the one hand, I concede that working from home, sometimes it may complicate to resolve any major problems like browser error or poor connectivity due to that people could not work properly or sometimes it may take long time to fix that problem alone. It could be argued that people become lazy because they work in full of comfort consequently they may sleepy or fell lonely as a result chances of mistakes may increase. Another downside is that people may disturb frequently by their family members or their children due to that it may hindrance to accomplish the companies’ work on specific time. However, although the advantages to working from home are massive, I feel that people can work everywhere with their flexible time due to that work productivity and accuracy would increase. Moreover, individual could save their extra expense of transportation especially those who are living far from the work place. Also, everybody could work according to their own preference like they could were regular routine clothes instead of uniform, select place according to their choice and can work without any under supervision of head. To conclude, although, I admit that working from home is sometimes troublesome for getting desire solutions in connectivity of browser however, saving extravagant transportation cost and work flexibility are prominent goal of everyone. Therefore, I believe that merits for the work at home more than demerits.
In this concurrent era,
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people
have their
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digital gadgets like laptops, computers, mobile phone and
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many
others
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due
to that they can
easily
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work
from home.
However
,
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despites it
is difficult to
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get
instant solutions about any queries regarding
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companies
’ task and interrogation with
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companies
,
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people
, I
still
believe that the advantages of
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working
at home outweigh the drawbacks.

On the one hand, I concede that
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working
from home,
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sometimes
it may complicate to resolve any major problems like browser error or poor connectivity
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due
to that
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people
could not
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work
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properly or
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sometimes
it may take long time to
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fix
that problem alone. It could
be argued
that
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people
become lazy
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because
they
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work
in full of comfort
consequently
they
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may sleepy
or fell lonely
as a result
chances of mistakes may increase. Another downside is that
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people
may disturb
frequently
by their family members or their children
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due
to that it
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may hindrance
to accomplish the
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companies
’
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work
on specific time.

However
, although the advantages to
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working
from home are massive, I feel that
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people
can
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work
everywhere with their flexible time
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due
to that
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work
productivity and accuracy would increase.
Moreover
, individual could save their extra expense of transportation
especially
those who are living far from the
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work
place.
Also
, everybody could
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
according to their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
preference like they could were regular routine clothes
instead
of uniform, select place according to their choice and can
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work
without any under supervision of head.

To conclude
, although, I admit that
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working
from home is
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sometimes
troublesome for getting desire solutions in connectivity of browser
however
, saving extravagant transportation cost and
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work
flexibility are prominent goal of everyone.
Therefore
, I believe that merits for the
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work
at home more than demerits.
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IELTS essay . Social media is becoming increasingly popular among all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risk. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantage?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
293 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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