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Smoking should be banned.

Smoking should be banned. YeaB

Nowadays, smoking has become very popular all over the world that many people are used to smoke anytime and anywhere. However, they may overlook that smoking can be harmful to their health and there are some disadvantages of smoking for people who are a smoker and even a non-smoker. Firstly, smoking can irritate people's lungs and respiratory system, and seriously it can also cause lung cancer. Some people who are a smoker are used to smoke frequently like at least 4 - 6 times per day that they start to smoke after breakfast and before lunch and after lunch and after dinner.

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