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Smoking should be banned.

Smoking should be banned. YeaB
Nowadays, smoking has become very popular all over the world that many people are used to smoke anytime and anywhere. However, they may overlook that smoking can be harmful to their health and there are some disadvantages of smoking for people who are a smoker and even a non-smoker. Firstly, smoking can irritate people's lungs and respiratory system, and seriously it can also cause lung cancer. Some people who are a smoker are used to smoke frequently like at least 4 - 6 times per day that they start to smoke after breakfast and before lunch and after lunch and after dinner.
Nowadays,
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smoking
has become
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popular all over the world that
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many
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people
are
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used
to smoke anytime and anywhere.
However
, they may overlook that
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smoking
can be harmful to their health and there are
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some
disadvantages of
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smoking
for
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people
who are a smoker and even a non-smoker.

Firstly
,
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smoking
can irritate
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people
's lungs and respiratory system, and
seriously
it can
also
cause lung cancer.
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Some
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people
who are a smoker are
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used
to smoke
frequently
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4 - 6
times per day that they
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start
to smoke after breakfast and
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lunch and after lunch and after dinner.

IELTS essay Smoking should be banned.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
102 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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