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small and large business in the world

small and large business in the world XDYOY
Generally all businesses started from small to begin larger at the time. In these days there were al lot of small business that there were taken from a larger business. In my opinion it's nice from a side and bad in an other side, but it's good generally. Why it's good? ? i have 2 reasons: First reason when a large company or business take a small business to there side or buying it, it will give large company more working hands and in another side it will give small company a lot of money to do there job. second reason is about the challenge between large company, who will take small company more than other and who will do something amazing more than other. What i want to say is that thing have really good side and that is.
Generally
all
businesses
started
from
small
to
begin
larger at the time. In these days there were
al
lot of
small
business
that there
were taken
from a larger
business
. In my opinion it's nice from a side and
bad
in
an other
side,
but
it's
good
generally
. Why it's
good
? ?
i
have 2 reasons:

First
reason when a large
company
or
business
take a
small
business
to there side or buying it, it will give large
company
more working hands and in another side it will give
small
company
a lot of
money to do
there
job.

second
reason is about the challenge between large
company
, who will take
small
company
more than other and who will do something amazing more than other.

What
i
want to say is
that thing have
really
good
side and
that is
.
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IELTS essay small and large business in the world

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
140 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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