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small and large business in the world

small and large business in the world XDYOY
Generally all businesses started from small to begin larger at the time. In these days there were al lot of small business that there were taken from a larger business. In my opinion it's nice from a side and bad in an other side, but it's good generally. Why it's good? ? i have 2 reasons: First reason when a large company or business take a small business to there side or buying it, it will give large company more working hands and in another side it will give small company a lot of money to do there job. second reason is about the challenge between large company, who will take small company more than other and who will do something amazing more than other. What i want to say is that thing have really good side and that is.
Generally
all
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businesses
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started
from
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small
to
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begin
larger at the time. In these days there were
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al
lot of
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small
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business
that there
were taken
from a larger
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business
. In my opinion it's nice from a side and
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bad
in
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an other
side,
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but
it's
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good
generally
. Why it's
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good
? ?
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i
have 2 reasons:

First
reason when a large
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company
or
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business
take a
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small
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business
to there side or buying it, it will give large
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company
more working hands and in another side it will give
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small
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company
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a lot of
money to do
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there
job.

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second
reason is about the challenge between large
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company
, who will take
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small
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company
more than other and who will do something amazing more than other.

What
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i
want to say is
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that thing have
really
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good
side and
that is
.
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IELTS essay small and large business in the world

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
140 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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