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Should the government or teachers be responsible for what is to be taught in schools? Give a reason for your answers and include relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Should the government or teachers be responsible for what is to be taught in schools? Give a reason for your answers and include relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. AoKX
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IELTS essay Should the government or teachers be responsible for what is to be taught in schools? Give a reason for your answers and include relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
435 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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