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Write about the following topic. Should students be allowed to choose which classes they take, or should they be required to take the same classes as everyone else? What are the advantages and disadvantages of each approach to education? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Should students be allowed to choose which classes they take, or should they be required to take the same classes as everyone else? What are the advantages and disadvantages of each approach to education? 0dal
Studying is a daunting process through which students can build their careers and have themselves prepared for the market's challenges. However, during the preparation years, should students choose the subjects they need to learn or go through the same classes as everyone. Each approach has some advantages and disadvantages, and a closer look will be taken at each one separately. Allowing students to choose the desired classes could help them find their passion. Learners would be more enthusiastic if they were free to select the courses they like. For example, visual learners might prefer the practical seen lessons over the academic knowledge. However, this comes at a price, like having a vocational graduate without any academic-based knowledge. On the other hand, being stuck with preselected materials as everyone in the same class has its pros and cons. It is advantageous for some endeavours to have standard courses, either student chooses it or not. For instance, a license required professions as medicine requires having certain classes; otherwise, the graduate will not be qualified for giving a medical service to the public. However, the feeling that a scholar is obligated on a preplanned curriculum could be frustrating for many students. A hybrid method could be a good solution by allowing students to have a required graduation courses list and an optional one. In conclusion, allowing students to choose between classes might be encouraging but could have resulted in unprepared graduates. Conversely, course standardization has its advantages, especially for professional graduates, but it could be seen as unwelcome enforcement. I believe a mix between both ways could be a proper solution for that dilemma.
Studying is a daunting process through which
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students
can build their careers and have themselves prepared for the market's challenges.
However
, during the preparation years, should
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students
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choose
the subjects they need to learn or go through the same
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classes
as everyone. Each approach has
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some
advantages and disadvantages, and a closer look will
be taken
at each one
separately
.

Allowing
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students
to
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choose
the desired
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classes
could
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help
them find their passion. Learners would be more enthusiastic if they were free to select the
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courses
they like.
For example
, visual learners might prefer the practical
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seen
lessons over the academic knowledge.
However
, this
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comes
at a price, like having a vocational
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graduate
without any academic-based knowledge.

On the other hand
,
being stuck
with preselected materials as everyone in the same
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class
has its pros and cons. It is advantageous for
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some
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endeavours
to have standard
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courses
, either
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student
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chooses
it or not.
For instance
, a license required professions as medicine requires having certain
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classes
;
otherwise
, the
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graduate
will not
be qualified
for giving a medical service to the public.
However
, the feeling that a scholar
is obligated
on a
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preplanned
curriculum could be frustrating for
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many
students.

A hybrid method could be a
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good
solution by allowing
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students
to have a required graduation
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courses
list and an optional one.

In conclusion
, allowing
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students
to
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choose
between
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classes
might be encouraging
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but
could have resulted in unprepared
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graduates
.
Conversely
,
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course
standardization has its advantages,
especially
for professional
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graduates
,
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but
it could be
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seen
as unwelcome enforcement. I believe a mix between both ways could be a proper solution for that dilemma.
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IELTS essay Should students be allowed to choose which classes they take, or should they be required to take the same classes as everyone else? What are the advantages and disadvantages of each approach to education?

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5 paragraphs
271 words
6.0
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