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Should parents punish their children and to what extent is punishment important in a child's life? Hive your opinion.

Nowadays, children are more toward about technolegy and its uses. At some point children are doing somthing beyond their parents's and those are not legible to childrens point of view. So parents have to punish their child. Well, parents have to look at their children to how they consequently behaving some children are fractious or calm all have own mindset. So Parents would have to strict especilly for a elvish children and have to punish. So that they will not repet same things was did in past. While, parents have to give punishment when children doing somthing wrong so they learn from that and at certain level punishment to children which they note in their mind. Sometime that punishment affectd on rest of the life and they always aware about that. While, punishment does not mean to hit children. There are plenty of trickes to punish the children. Moreover, It could be help on children growth and the better way to understand the valuse of perticular things, that done wrong in life. Sometimes parents would have to punish their children for their better growth and learn a lesson from that. While, every children have differnt mindset and for them at a certain level of punishment for changing in their behavior. At certain phrases, punishment is good for children’s better future or learns a mistake. Moreover, good way to teach a children is always take in their mind.
Nowadays,
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children
are more toward about
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technolegy
and its
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uses
. At
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some
point
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children
are doing
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somthing
beyond their
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parents's
and those are not legible to
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childrens
point of view.
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So
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parents
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have to
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punish
their child.

Well,
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parents
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have to
look at their
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children
to how they
consequently
behaving
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some
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children
are fractious or calm all have
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own
mindset.
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So
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Parents
would
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have to
strict
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especilly
for a elvish
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children
and
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have to
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punish
.
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So that
they will not
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repet
same things was
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did
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in past
. While,
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parents
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have to
give
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punishment
when
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children
doing
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somthing
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wrong
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so
they learn from that and at certain level
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punishment
to
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children
which they note in their mind. Sometime that
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punishment
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affectd
on rest of the life and they always aware about that.

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,
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does not mean to hit
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children
. There are
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plenty
of
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trickes
to
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the
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children
.
Moreover
, It could be
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help
on
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children
growth and the better way to understand the
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valuse
of
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perticular
things, that done
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wrong
in life.
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Sometimes
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parents
would
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have to
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punish
their
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children
for their better growth and learn a lesson from that. While, every
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children
have
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differnt
mindset and for them at a certain level of
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punishment
for changing in their behavior.

At certain phrases,
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punishment
is
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good
for
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children’s
better future or learns a mistake.
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,
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good
way to teach a
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children
is always take in their mind.
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IELTS essay Should parents punish their children and Hive your opinion.

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