Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

fset food cause and effects

Cause and effect essay. *Effects of Fast Food* These dsys we see lots of advertisements for fast food restaurants. But why do people try to promote unhealthy food and what are the reasons for these? Maybe because The fast food is easy to cook and prepared and it is easily available. The people who benefit of these businesses have their own purposes and it is financial improvements. There are causes that may led to the growth of the fast-food industry. But what is more important is the effects that it has on society and peole including health problem, obesity and loss of the family tradition of eating together. One important effect of fast food is that it can get people's health in danger status. First, we must say that fast food can cause vitamin deficiencies that in turn, causes diseases. Obesity is one of the results of fast food on the human body. Obesity comes because fast food enriches the body with fats. So people will become less healthy, less effective, and less productive, and this is the results of obesity. Another serious effect of fstt food is the loss of the family tradition of eating together. The family used to eat together, and thus they had the opportunity to talk with each other for daily problems. Fast food also has an effect on the income of the family. The conclusion is that fast food is more expensive than the food you cook for yourself. To summarize, it can be said that fast food has been one of the disasters of today societies. Unfortunately, the effects containing health problem, obesity and loss of the family tradition of eating together can be considered as disadvantages. It has unuseful effects on the human body and health are not positive. It also has other negative effects on the income of a family. It would be grear if people avoid eating unhealthy food.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Cause
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
effect
essay.

*Effects of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Fast
Food*

These
Possible spelling mistake found.
dsys
we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
lots of advertisements for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
restaurants.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
why do
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
try to promote unhealthy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
and what are the reasons for these? Maybe
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
is easy to cook and
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
prepared and
it is
easily
available. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who benefit of these businesses have their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
purposes and
it is financial improvements.

There are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
causes
that may
The modal verb ‘may’ requires the verb’s base form.
led
to the growth of the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
-food industry.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
what is more
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
is the effects that it has on society and
Possible spelling mistake found.
peole
including health problem, obesity
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.
and


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.
loss
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
tradition of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
eating
together.

One
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
effect
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
is that it can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
's health in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
danger
status.
First
, we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
say that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cause
vitamin deficiencies that in turn,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
causes
diseases.

Obesity is one of the results of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
on the human body. Obesity
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
enriches the body with fats.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
will become less healthy, less effective, and less productive, and this is the results of obesity.

Another serious
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
effect
of
Possible spelling mistake found.
fstt
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
is the loss of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
tradition of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
eating
together. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to eat together, and
thus
they had the opportunity to talk with each other for daily problems.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Fast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
also
has an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
effect
on the income of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
. The conclusion is that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
is more expensive than the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
you cook for yourself.

To summarize
, it can
be said
that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
has been one of the disasters of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
societies. Unfortunately, the effects containing

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.
health
problem, obesity and loss of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
tradition of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
eating
together can
be considered
as disadvantages. It has unuseful effects on the human body and health are not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
. It
also
has other
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
effects on the income of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
It
would
Possible spelling mistake found.
be grear
if
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
avoid
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
eating
unhealthy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay fset food cause and effects

Essay
  American English
11 paragraphs
319 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts