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Sea otter decline population

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The reading and the lecture are both about the decling population of the sea otter. Whereas the the author of the reading states that the number of sea otter declined becuse of the pollution. The lecturer suggests that the reason of this decline is the preditor. First of all, according to the reading, there are oil rigs and other sources in the alaskan coast that couse pollution. However, the lecturer disputes this point. She says that the orces his deit was eating whales until the human hunt the whales in that aera which leaves no other choise for orces exept eating sea mammals. Secondlyy, The reading stated that other sea mammals also declined which means that both sea mammals and sea otter facing the same life-threateing cause. Nevertheless, the lecturer refutes this argument. She argues that the preditor has to change his deit in order to servive since the whale are hunted by human. Finally, the reading claims that the comunty thinks that the pollution explains the uneven pattern of otter decline. On the other hand, the lecturer belive that there is some areas the population is not affected because it is hard to reach by orces the preditor.
The
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reading
and the lecture are both about the
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decling
population of the
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sea
otter.
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the the
author of the
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reading
states that the number of
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sea
otter declined
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becuse
of the pollution. The
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lecturer
suggests that the reason of this decline is the
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preditor
.

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First of all
, according to the
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reading
, there are oil rigs and
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other
sources in the
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alaskan
coast that
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couse
pollution.
However
, the
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lecturer
disputes this point. She says that the
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orces
his
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deit
was eating whales until the human hunt the whales in that
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aera
which
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leaves
no
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other
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choise
for
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orces
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exept
eating
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sea
mammals.

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Secondlyy
, The
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reading
stated that
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other
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sea
mammals
also
declined which means that both
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sea
mammals and
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sea
otter facing the same
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life-threateing
cause.
Nevertheless
, the
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lecturer
refutes this argument. She argues that the
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preditor
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has to
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change
his
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deit
in order to
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servive
since the whale
are hunted
by human.

Finally
, the
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reading
claims that the
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comunty
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thinks
that the pollution
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explains
the uneven pattern of otter decline. On the
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other
hand, the
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lecturer
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belive
that there is
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some
areas the population is not
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affected
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because
it is
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hard
to reach by
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orces
the
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preditor
.

IELTS essay Sea otter decline population

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
199 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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