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Sama people Think that planting a tree is in open spaces in city's and towns is more important than building horses to what extent do you agree or disagree

Sama people Think that planting a tree is in open spaces in city's and towns is more important than building horses 0xX1
It is a frequently seen that nowadays, pollution is much increased as compared to past few decades. some people believe that planting a tree in around city's is more crucial than contraction of houses. I completely agree with this statement, in the forthcoming paragraphs I will discuss point regarding this. to commence with, there are several benefits of planting tree in city's to explain it, in this subject said age increase the number of transportation induced pollution exceptionally in cities so it would diminish by planting more trees apart from this, and eventually not only receive fresh air or oxygen but also dream dimension of from overseas diseases for instance people who live in ruler areas they live healthy life as compare to urban areas we need to in ruler areas and grow more trees
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that nowadays, pollution is much increased as compared to past few decades.
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some
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people
believe that planting a
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tree
in around city's is more crucial than contraction of
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houses
. I completely
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agree
with this statement, in the forthcoming paragraphs I will discuss point regarding this.
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to
commence with, there are several benefits of planting
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tree
in city's to
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it, in this subject said age increase the number of transportation induced pollution
exceptionally
in cities
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it would diminish by planting more
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trees
apart from this, and
eventually
not
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only
receive fresh air or oxygen
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but
also
dream dimension of from overseas diseases
for instance
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people
who
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live
in ruler areas they
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healthy life as compare to urban areas we need to in ruler areas and grow more
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IELTS essay Sama people Think that planting a tree is in open spaces in city's and towns is more important than building horses

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  American English
1 paragraphs
134 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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