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Recently, there has been a lot of debate whether or not buzzing" which is a new tactic used by advertisement company, when advertiser hire people, buzzer, to promote products to people they know or meet" should be banned.

Recently, there has been a lot of debate whether or not buzzing" which is a new tactic used by advertisement company, when advertiser hire people, buzzer, to promote products to people they know or meet" should be banned. kYERd
Recently, there has been a lot of debate whether or not buzzing" which is a new tactic used by advertisement company, when advertiser hire people, buzzer, to promote products to people they know or meet" should be banned. One group represented by the Buzzer how talked to the class supports the new promotion tactic. However, others like the author claims that buzzing should come be prohibited. First, the buzzer explains that the company hire people how used the product and loved it, so technically the buzzer is telling the truth about a product he used for a while and enjoyed. Even though he is getting paid for the advertisement but at the mean time the buzzer is not deceiving the consumer. However, the text defends the idea that the consumer should have the right to know that this person, buzzer, is getting paid to praise a product. Second, the buzzer contends that the consumer do not listen and obey whatever the buzzer tells them, instead he explains that consumers usually asks a lot of question to ensure that what the buzzer is telling them is right, like what is the price of the product, and how long you used the product. He added that if the buzzer does not have the right good answer no one will buy the product. However the text asserts that consumers listen to buzzer without questioning their credibility. Finally, the buzzer claims that if the consumer bought a good product that been praised by a buzzer, he would trust people more. Thus buzzing will not destroy the civilization. However, the text thinks that the worst effect of buzzing is destroying the social relationships.
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by advertisement
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company
, when advertiser hire
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products
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meet&quot
; should
be banned
. One group represented by the Buzzer how talked to the
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class
supports the new promotion tactic.
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, others like the author claims that buzzing should
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come
be prohibited
.

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, the buzzer
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explains
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company
hire
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people
how
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used
the
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product
and
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loved
it,
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technically
the buzzer is telling the truth about a
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product
he
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used
for a while and enjoyed.
Even though
he is getting paid for the advertisement
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at the mean time the buzzer is not deceiving the
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consumer
.
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, the text defends the
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idea
that the
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consumer
should have the right to know that this person, buzzer, is getting paid to praise a product.

Second, the buzzer contends that the
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consumer
do not listen and obey whatever the buzzer
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them,
instead
he
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question to ensure that what the buzzer is telling them is right, like what is the price of the
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product
, and how long you
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used
the
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product
. He
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added
that if the buzzer does not have the right
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good
answer no one will
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buy
the
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product
.
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However
the text asserts that
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consumers
listen to buzzer without questioning their credibility.

Finally
, the buzzer claims that if the
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consumer
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bought
a
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good
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product
that
been praised
by a buzzer, he would trust
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people
more.
Thus
buzzing will not
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destroy
the civilization.
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, the text
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that the worst effect of buzzing is destroying the social relationships.
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IELTS essay Recently, there has been a lot of debate whether or not buzzing" which is a new tactic used by advertisement company, when advertiser hire people, buzzer, to promote products to people they know or meet" should be banned.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
278 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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