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Recently, a multiple government has fixed the age of retiring at 65 years old.

Recently, a multiple government has fixed the age of retiring at 65 years old. Neither the employee works as a bricklayer or as an accountant. However, This crucial decision is a hotly debated topic that often divides opinion. In my point of view, there are several workers deed to stop working at the age of 65 years, or even less, due to the hard work they do and the critical tasks in their everyday duty. On the one hand, a plethora of jobs require a huge physical efforts to establish

Recently, a multiple This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectified
fixed
 the age of retiring at 65 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
. Neither the employee works as a bricklayer Use “nor” with neither.nor
or
 as an accountant. However
, This crucial decision is a hotly
 debated topic that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 divides opinion. In my point of view, there are several workers deed to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 working at the age of 65 years, or even less, due to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 work they do and the critical tasks in their everyday duty. On the one hand, a plethora of jobs require The plural noun “efforts” cannot be used with the article “a”. Did you mean “a huge physical effort” or “huge physical efforts”?a huge physical efforthuge physical efforts
a huge physical efforts
 to Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.establish.establish!establish?establish:establish,establish;
establish