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Rationale for the Selection of the Project Why is this topic worth investigating

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The insurance business is one of the extremely competitive businesses locally and globally today and they modify appropriately prepared customer retention strategies caused for performance enhancement and the success of the company. A researcher has selected this topic based on interest in the insurance sector in Sri Lanka. And a rationale behind selecting Sri Lanka Insurance is one of the leading insurance companies. Also, their several strategies caused them to become the market leaders in the industry. So, , the further researchers would like to study what kind of customer retention strategies need to adapt them to effectively deliver value to its policyholders and to gauge their performance.
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business is one of the
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and globally
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prepared customer retention strategies caused for performance enhancement and the success of the
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company
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A researcher has selected this topic based on interest in the
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insurance
sector in Sri Lanka. And a rationale behind selecting Sri Lanka
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Insurance
is one of the leading
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insurance
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companies
.

Also
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researchers would like to study what kind of customer retention strategies need to adapt them to
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IELTS essay Rationale for the Selection of the Project Why is this topic worth investigating

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