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PROS AND CONS OF CO-EDUCATION

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Our society is becoming more and more developed. As a result, gender equality also improves and boys and girls can go to school equally. Therefore, co-education was born and gradually replace single-sex education. However, everything has two sides: advantages and disadvantages and co-education has no exception. To begin with, co-education can help pupil prepare for their future life. Co-education itself gives students the chance to be in an environment that mirrors the real world. In the future, scholars ought to work with both man and women consequently when they were put into this environment, they can learn how to interact, communicate with their male or female counterparts. It can also support them respect each other and reduce confusion when they get into real life. Secondly, co-education can help students develop brains and minds more. Normally, most male students are always good at science subjects, such as Math, Physics, Chemistry, …on the contrary the girl is usually gifted in the subjects, such as Literature, English, History, … Because of this, they can support each other with their strength and weakness. Finally, studying in a co-education school can create respect for the opposite gender. In the past, female scholars were treated unfairly, they didn’t have any right to talk for themselves, didn’t have any chance to become a leader. However, co-education has prevented it. due to the fact when both sexes interact regularly in the same environment, the boys can eliminate stereotypes about girls and raise awareness of gender equality. On the other hand, co- education also brings some disadvantages. First of all, co-education can make students immerse themselves in love relationships, esspecially when students begin to move into teenager’s years. When both sexes study in the same environment, they easily fall in love with the opposite sex. As a result, they can not focus on their study and lead to bad marks. Unfortunately, some have to stop their study because they get pregnant. And this accidentally destroy their future. Second of all, in some co-education school, there is also a phenomenon of sexual harassment. Associate Professor Dr. Tran Thanh Nam - Dean of the Faculty of Educational Sciences, University of Education (Vietnam National University, Hanoi) - said that he and his colleagues conducted a study on 400 students in grades 10 and 11. studying at two schools in Hanoi and Nam Dinh. Because student at this age are not mature in thinking. Their study indicated that 63% of students who participated in the survey confirmed that the school had sexual harassment.
Our society is becoming more and more developed.
As a result
, gender equality
also
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improves
and boys and girls can go to
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school
equally
.
Therefore
, co-education
was born
and
gradually
replace single-sex education.
However
, everything has two sides: advantages and disadvantages and co-education has no exception.

To
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begin
with, co-education can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
pupil prepare for their future life. Co-education itself gives
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students
the chance to be in an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
that mirrors the real world. In the future, scholars ought to work with both
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
and women
consequently
when they
were put
into this
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environment
, they can learn how to interact, communicate with their male or female counterparts. It can
also
support them respect each other and
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reduce
confusion when they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
into real life.
Secondly
, co-education can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
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students
develop brains and minds more.
Normally
, most male
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students
are always
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
at science subjects, such as Math, Physics, Chemistry, …
on the contrary
the girl is
usually
gifted in the subjects, such as Literature, English, History, …
Because of this
, they can support each other with their strength and weakness.
Finally
, studying in a co-education
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
school
can create respect for the opposite gender. In the past, female scholars
were treated
unfairly
, they didn’t have any right to talk for themselves, didn’t have any chance to become a leader.
However
, co-education has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
prevented
it. due to the fact when both sexes interact
regularly
in the same
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environment
, the boys can eliminate stereotypes about girls and raise awareness of gender equality.

On the other hand
, co- education
also
brings
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some
disadvantages.
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First of all
, co-education can
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make
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students
immerse themselves in
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love
relationships,
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esspecially
when
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students
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begin
to
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move
into
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teenager
’s years. When both sexes
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study
in the same
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environment
, they
easily
fall in
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love
with the opposite sex.
As a result
, they can not focus on their
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study
and lead to
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bad
marks. Unfortunately,
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some
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have to
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stop
their
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study
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because
they
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get
pregnant. And this
accidentally
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destroy
their future. Second of all, in
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some
co-education
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school
, there is
also
a phenomenon of sexual harassment. Associate Professor Dr. Tran Thanh Nam
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Dean of the Faculty of Educational Sciences, University of Education (Vietnam National University, Hanoi)
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-
said that he and his colleagues conducted a
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study
on 400
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students
in grades 10 and 11.
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studying
at two
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schools
in Hanoi and Nam
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Dinh
.
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Because
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student
at this age are not mature in thinking. Their
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study
indicated that 63% of
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students
who participated in the survey confirmed that the
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school
had sexual harassment.
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IELTS essay PROS AND CONS OF CO-EDUCATION

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
420 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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